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3/25/2021 c7 Guest X
This is an exceedly well crafted story! Very well bone, the characters are lively and well described as well as the location and setting.
I am very impressed and look forward to any and all updates you have and/or had planned and I hope do not let anyone convince you to let this story gather any more dust!
Keep up the great work and stay frosty!
12/14/2020 c7 Guest
Do you plan on ever coming back to this story or passing it onto someone because it is very good and well written
10/21/2017 c7 SethisawesomeGT
This is a good story, but I am unsure whether that I should be offended that Seth shares my name, or flattered...
10/8/2015 c7 Brenden
goodwork
3/31/2015 c1 Brenden
goodwork
2/20/2014 c7 Random Norwegian
Hi again.
I was wondering if Demise actually managed to take control over the Alpha Ceph and thus the Ceph, this is due to the fact that the Ceph in Crysis 1 appeared to be more interested in getting the hell out of dodge than stay on to them a very inhospitable planet while in Crysis 2 we see the stereotypical genocidal aliens, could this actually be Demise that is controlling them?
2/17/2014 c7 Random Norwegian
Hi.
When are you going to continue this story because this is a story that has a lot of potential. Given that in the Zelda series reincarnation appears to be the big thing with Link, Zelda/Hylia & Ganondorf/Demise the main actors. Are Link & Zelda going to be incarnations of Crysis characters? If so i have a couple of good candidates for them Link/Alcatraz & Zelda/Hylia/Tara Strickland.

There is also evidence that Nomad might be alive as of Crysis 3, if he is in your story he would be a good ally for Prophet. How would the Godesses react to the fall of Earth and all the billions of people that died what the Nanosuit really does to people & how would Prophet react to genuine Gods & Magic? If they are genuine Gods are we going to see Gods such as Zeus, Odin, God and others?

This story has a lot of potential, keep going.
12/24/2013 c6 2Cthulujr
Nice work so far. Crysis has far too few fanfics written for it.
11/6/2013 c7 Deimos99340
more!
10/6/2013 c1 Kane
Hey, subsider34 got something for you that might interest you.
It's a Rome: Total War game called Hyrule:Total War and the history in the differing campaigns is very intriguing so I though it might garner you interest and maybe give you some inspiration for future events in your up coming chapters so, either go to Youtube or insert that mod's name on deviantart's search function or put in the name UndyingNephalim and you should find something...

I hope that helps you out of your writer's block or whatever else seems to be preventing you from updating...

Bye...
9/27/2013 c1 Kane
Well,
the story looks quite promising and has a lot of potential, though you still seem to switch between third and first person perspective at the wrong time even in your most recently published chapter...but aside from that, continue with writing on this story.

Got a question though, are we going to see Prophet training the Gerudo in matters of stealth by utilizing his cloaking field in some manner?
Another thing is the question of "is Hyrule (or the entire Zelda universe) going to be introduced to firearms at some point?
Oh and, how are the Ceph going to be involved in this entire matter, as well as the question of what the Goddesses of the Zelda universe exactly are?...

Bye
9/16/2013 c6 Noob6
this is awesome please more chapters!
6/21/2013 c6 10Apocalyptian Scribe
interesting
I'll be following this story man
6/4/2013 c6 Dracomancer1
Oh this is getting absolutely fantastic. I can see you're already peeling back the mystical façade of the Zelda universe to reveal science and extraterrestrial activity underneath, and I'm loving it.
5/19/2013 c5 Guest
This story is progressing along nicely. But I don't think that Prophet would like to be a king. He seems like the kind of guy who would like to stay a soldier. Hope you update soon.
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