
10/17/2013 c4 DemonCat008
Aww... *snort* I can see North getting stuck and it's the most beautiful thing I've ever imagined in my life
Aww... *snort* I can see North getting stuck and it's the most beautiful thing I've ever imagined in my life
8/20/2013 c5
41miss skinny love
Oh my gosh I just reread this chapter (don't ask, I dunno why I do these things...) and I laughed all over again when Jack hoped North was just stuck in a door again.
Bunny- you should REALLY get over your fear of flight (: it's probably one of the fastest ways to travel in the spirit world... *Thinking face*
Then when she called the summer helpers b*tches I was like BURN. Great job with the accents! And yes, my Dad says Yeti is the plural. (:
I love this story, great job! Can't wait for the next update! Btw; Good luck with your exams (:

Oh my gosh I just reread this chapter (don't ask, I dunno why I do these things...) and I laughed all over again when Jack hoped North was just stuck in a door again.
Bunny- you should REALLY get over your fear of flight (: it's probably one of the fastest ways to travel in the spirit world... *Thinking face*
Then when she called the summer helpers b*tches I was like BURN. Great job with the accents! And yes, my Dad says Yeti is the plural. (:
I love this story, great job! Can't wait for the next update! Btw; Good luck with your exams (:
5/17/2013 c5
2JustLikeCrystal
This is a really engaging story! :D I'm excited to see where it's going to lead

This is a really engaging story! :D I'm excited to see where it's going to lead
4/1/2013 c4 guest
This is CRAZY good. Keep going, PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes*
This is CRAZY good. Keep going, PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes*
4/2/2013 c5
2the witch in your heart
Couls you write a list of what spirit is what. Names then there job.
And also i quiet enkoy reading your story but i am curious as to who the summer spirit is and what she did

Couls you write a list of what spirit is what. Names then there job.
And also i quiet enkoy reading your story but i am curious as to who the summer spirit is and what she did
4/2/2013 c5
3Katyuana
Sorry! I would've read and reviewed but I had class and couldn't! Now i feel late... anyway! loving your updates they are worth any wait! And the Trio of Tricksters? Wow! Jack is one of them? But weren't there three in the scene change. So Quartet? Hmm well I'm sure I misunderstood and you know what you are doing!

Sorry! I would've read and reviewed but I had class and couldn't! Now i feel late... anyway! loving your updates they are worth any wait! And the Trio of Tricksters? Wow! Jack is one of them? But weren't there three in the scene change. So Quartet? Hmm well I'm sure I misunderstood and you know what you are doing!
3/28/2013 c4
8Mystichawk
Most likely North had gotten stuck in the doorway.
Yay! I'm the third reviewer! Just like I was the second! And the first!
This story is really good, but I think you might want to ration it out a bit more. Just the huge chunks of text. They kinda hurt my eyes, although that might just be me from being on the computer too much. Love and cookies for all!

Most likely North had gotten stuck in the doorway.
Yay! I'm the third reviewer! Just like I was the second! And the first!
This story is really good, but I think you might want to ration it out a bit more. Just the huge chunks of text. They kinda hurt my eyes, although that might just be me from being on the computer too much. Love and cookies for all!
3/27/2013 c3 Mystichawk
A woman. Well, that definitely rules out Pitch. Robyn Hood, huh? Nice twist on the name. YAY! Virtual cookies! I likee so far. Keep up the good work!
A woman. Well, that definitely rules out Pitch. Robyn Hood, huh? Nice twist on the name. YAY! Virtual cookies! I likee so far. Keep up the good work!
3/26/2013 c2 Mystichawk
Well, by the words 'Dark silhouette,' I'd imagine it was Pitch, but Pitch isn't that cool, and he doesn't beg. At least, not to my knowledge. The chapter was pretty good.
Well, by the words 'Dark silhouette,' I'd imagine it was Pitch, but Pitch isn't that cool, and he doesn't beg. At least, not to my knowledge. The chapter was pretty good.