for The power of Fear4/3/2013 c19 Guest
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
4/5/2013 c23 
3RonniieKnox
Jack! Nooooooooo! Ohmygawd I think I just had an emotional breakdown... Jeez, that was a fantastic chapter.. UPDATE. SOON.
3RonniieKnoxJack! Nooooooooo! Ohmygawd I think I just had an emotional breakdown... Jeez, that was a fantastic chapter.. UPDATE. SOON.
4/3/2013 c19 Sophia Griffin
This... Is... A cool chapter.
The only plot idea I would add is have Toothiana go after Jack in the next chapter or the one after. XP
Still amazing stuff here
This... Is... A cool chapter.
The only plot idea I would add is have Toothiana go after Jack in the next chapter or the one after. XP
Still amazing stuff here
4/5/2013 c23 2Orihara Nakura
Oh no, that's so sad! :o( I love all of your updates and I swear I'm going to review screwy update!
2Orihara NakuraOh no, that's so sad! :o( I love all of your updates and I swear I'm going to review screwy update!
4/5/2013 c23 beanie-art1
*looks at floor* see that? That's my shattered heart all over the floor... U better clean it up :-P
Lol fantastic chapter ( I feel kinda spoilt getting two in one day :3) I wonder what's gonna happen now, it seems all hope is lost D:
Update soon :D
*looks at floor* see that? That's my shattered heart all over the floor... U better clean it up :-P
Lol fantastic chapter ( I feel kinda spoilt getting two in one day :3) I wonder what's gonna happen now, it seems all hope is lost D:
Update soon :D
4/5/2013 c23 AnaEl92
Nooooo Jack! Don't take it out on yourself, take it out on others (Aestive would be a great target right now)! I can't believe I'm enjoying all the angst. BTW, you managed to squeeze the beginning of a tear from my eye, impressive ;) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Nooooo Jack! Don't take it out on yourself, take it out on others (Aestive would be a great target right now)! I can't believe I'm enjoying all the angst. BTW, you managed to squeeze the beginning of a tear from my eye, impressive ;) I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/5/2013 c23 1Lexi123321
o.0 POOR JACK:'(! 2 chapters in one day!? wahaaaaaay! but now im up to date:( ahooo:( UPDATE ASAP! AMAAAAAAAAZING:D
1Lexi123321o.0 POOR JACK:'(! 2 chapters in one day!? wahaaaaaay! but now im up to date:( ahooo:( UPDATE ASAP! AMAAAAAAAAZING:D
4/3/2013 c8 That was so LOL
Tooth bashing Aestive into the ground 12 times over ! LOL XD
Tooth bashing Aestive into the ground 12 times over ! LOL XD
4/3/2013 c19 Guest
This is great! Continue!
This is great! Continue!
4/5/2013 c23 2pinkchocola
I swear I can hear my heart breaking right now. I feel sorry for Jack, he's been through a lot.
Anyhow, can't wait to see the next chapter!
2pinkchocolaI swear I can hear my heart breaking right now. I feel sorry for Jack, he's been through a lot.
Anyhow, can't wait to see the next chapter!
4/5/2013 c22 beanie-art1
Gah! Another big cliffhanger, I swear cliffhangers were created purposly to annoy me, I know every excellent story has cliffhangers but still...gah XP
don't leave me in suspense to long pretty please :3
Gah! Another big cliffhanger, I swear cliffhangers were created purposly to annoy me, I know every excellent story has cliffhangers but still...gah XP
don't leave me in suspense to long pretty please :3
4/5/2013 c22 50Magiccatprincess
OMG this chapter is soooo good! I wonder how the guardians react to how Jack is holding up
50MagiccatprincessOMG this chapter is soooo good! I wonder how the guardians react to how Jack is holding up
4/5/2013 c22 2pinkchocola
Goodness, this fic's getting me excited! I wonder what Pitch will do next. Hmm.
2pinkchocolaGoodness, this fic's getting me excited! I wonder what Pitch will do next. Hmm.