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for The power of Fear

3/29/2013 c11 2pinkchocola
Aww, that's so sad... I feel super sorry for Bunnymund now. :(
3/28/2013 c9 2Melan B.D
So no fast healing. It is another element after all... But it was cool. I dont think yetis understand they may do more harm then good. They should just lay a slab of of ice or frostbite the wound. But ur idea makes more angst which I relish. Finally bringing back tbe pitch thing. Cool. jacks uncertainty about fitting in and possibly loosing this chance at family hasn't been touched upon recently
3/28/2013 c8 Melan B.D
I meant sweet...from last time...sooo...this was coool. Hope they find him and he isnt as initially hurt. Fast healing and all that. The Four would just have to make due with helping the injuries that are still there.
3/28/2013 c7 Melan B.D
How sweer. It needed to be clearer the moment north and bunny went back to the warren. I kinda overlooked it and had to retract steps. By the way. Im typing on my phone, so autocorrect and all that typo stuff makes my review s unintelligable.
3/28/2013 c6 Melan B.D
Loved that u mentioned the sudden limping and looking over bruises. He Is the only one apart from Pitch that got thoroughly thrashed and knocked about. He may be a spirit with power but he still has skin to feel and sense the world that should have the ability to bruise. Phil was nasty enough right now. But if he could just keep it up or take it up a notch. Sigh of satisfaction
3/28/2013 c5 Melan B.D
And in the background unbeknown to them, jack hear their doubts in him. Dun dun duuun. :) Jack should just have palace, if he has great power before believers, then palace be made! Lol. I dont like how becoming guardian makes his powers depend on kids. He was fine before them kid's oath
3/28/2013 c4 Melan B.D
Ooooo. I wonder. Does that mean whoever takes that draught/draft will fear only jack? Or by just putting hair, jack will indirectly be affected by it (withput touching the draft) I will seee
3/28/2013 c3 Melan B.D
Oh my this ending of chapter gives me idea of phil being nasty to jack, but jack only keeps the issue to himself. And not to the punt that phil abuse jack, but is offhandedly nasty. Very impulse most fics in which the two seem to have a weird friendship.
3/28/2013 c1 Melan B.D
Ohohooooo. Awesome first chapter
3/28/2013 c9 2pinkchocola
This chapter has to be my favorite so far! Poor Jack, hopefully he'll get better soon. :(
3/27/2013 c8 4wisingstar
By The Angel! Jackie-boy, where are you?! Great chapter, and i love how your posting this many! The chapters are short, but they are fun to read and i like that!
3/27/2013 c8 1XMusicIsMyReligionX
loooovveee this cant wait for the next chapter !:D
3/27/2013 c6 2pinkchocola
This fanfic is really good, especially for a first one. :)
Personally though, I'd love for the chapters to be a bit longer. But other than that, it's great so far. Looking forward to see the next chapter/s.
3/26/2013 c1 8Zimpson11
Looking good :) will there be more soon?
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