
4/27/2013 c1 Guest
Great story. Update soon :)
Great story. Update soon :)
3/26/2013 c1 Mr.Drizzy
Great :)
Grammar issue's, solved
The new update is better then before ;)
Wish ya Luck
Great :)
Grammar issue's, solved
The new update is better then before ;)
Wish ya Luck
3/26/2013 c1 xXFaith.22Xx
Great Stuff, and I really like the Summary! :D
'Kai however on the other hand takes Interest in this "Little sister" Will he get what he wants?'
Urgh That just made me read the story! Good luck with this story! x
Great Stuff, and I really like the Summary! :D
'Kai however on the other hand takes Interest in this "Little sister" Will he get what he wants?'
Urgh That just made me read the story! Good luck with this story! x
3/26/2013 c1 XxKhloexX
I like the main character, great work! :)
Seriously can't wait for this rebellious, bad girl come out! XD
Good Luck xx
I like the main character, great work! :)
Seriously can't wait for this rebellious, bad girl come out! XD
Good Luck xx