1/15/2003 c1 Dinette
Umm.. okay. Haha I'm so extra. But anyway, just in case anyone sees this, the person was supposed to be either Mitsui or one of the benchwarmers only I was clever enough to forget to insert the persons name anywhere. go, me.
Umm.. okay. Haha I'm so extra. But anyway, just in case anyone sees this, the person was supposed to be either Mitsui or one of the benchwarmers only I was clever enough to forget to insert the persons name anywhere. go, me.
11/29/2002 c1 unchained
.oooohhhhhhh...who's POV is this? very heartwarming...beautiful writing, great use of metaphorical language...
i'm thinking it's kogure or akagi. but more kogure.
.oooohhhhhhh...who's POV is this? very heartwarming...beautiful writing, great use of metaphorical language...
i'm thinking it's kogure or akagi. but more kogure.
8/17/2002 c1 jeano
nice one here. write more pls? (to heck with exams)
nice one here. write more pls? (to heck with exams)
8/16/2002 c1 13Ginnie
Waaaaaah! WHO'S TALKING?
Really nice ficcie. Me likes! Hehehe... whaddya know, I didn't have to comment on grammar! Hehehe...
Waaaaaah! WHO'S TALKING?
Really nice ficcie. Me likes! Hehehe... whaddya know, I didn't have to comment on grammar! Hehehe...
8/16/2002 c1 Joy
Wow, that's a really great one. Hope you write more soon!
Wow, that's a really great one. Hope you write more soon!