
11/3/2021 c1 Guest
Very poor. Naruto could fight for HOURS against the white spore clones, edo ten people, against Madara, also die then against the rabbit goddess. After that he fought Sasuke to a stand still. Using a couple jutsus would be a drop in a lake of chakra. Fyi the tailed beasts are made of chakra. Killing it and a few years later it is back and at 100% again.
Very poor. Naruto could fight for HOURS against the white spore clones, edo ten people, against Madara, also die then against the rabbit goddess. After that he fought Sasuke to a stand still. Using a couple jutsus would be a drop in a lake of chakra. Fyi the tailed beasts are made of chakra. Killing it and a few years later it is back and at 100% again.
2/24/2020 c6 Guest
wow this sotry is bad and who cares about ur grandfather ur just shit, go read fanfics by "I luvgrace420" for some good sotries!
wow this sotry is bad and who cares about ur grandfather ur just shit, go read fanfics by "I luvgrace420" for some good sotries!
12/26/2019 c6 i luvgrace420
Nice excuse for why u were gone, if ur scared of fanfan then just say so.
Fucking dumbass, ur writing is shit anyways as is ur gay homo butt buddy mr grimjaw.
Nice excuse for why u were gone, if ur scared of fanfan then just say so.
Fucking dumbass, ur writing is shit anyways as is ur gay homo butt buddy mr grimjaw.
10/19/2018 c6 Guest
So fanfan9255 beat u and made u quit fanfiction huh? Pathetic.
So fanfan9255 beat u and made u quit fanfiction huh? Pathetic.
6/13/2017 c6 Guest
Cool just take you time and the story will come to you.
Cool just take you time and the story will come to you.
6/12/2017 c6 Guest
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2/26/2017 c6 Guest
Glad you finally back and ok. Can't wait for your update of this story.
Glad you finally back and ok. Can't wait for your update of this story.
3/23/2015 c5
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
2/12/2015 c5
33mr grimjaw
this is so good sadly narusaku lost the paring war the parings are naruhina and sauske saku sadly thairs more of canon fics now then before and the naruto fandom is dead but keep this up

this is so good sadly narusaku lost the paring war the parings are naruhina and sauske saku sadly thairs more of canon fics now then before and the naruto fandom is dead but keep this up
12/11/2014 c5 alice
vivement la suite
vivement la suite