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10/21/2013 c1 Guest
Kawaii! XD It wasn't overly sappy, but not dry at all either. Great fic!
10/21/2013 c1 Your friend
I told you I'd review! XD Honestly, I like your fic very much. I'm not really suprised that you're good at writing, you do read a lot and you're creative. I look foward to seeing you soon! :)
5/8/2013 c1 16damons-hot-as-hell
it was cute and totle them
4/12/2013 c1 12Mewsea
Heeheehee. :) Kisa is so cute. I can totally see him getting all flustered because of his "unnatural" feelings towards Yukina. So adorable! XD I think the ending was the cutest part!
4/6/2013 c1 SunshineProject
Im dying...im dying because this is so adorable...
so sweet...
3/29/2013 c1 7ComputerIdiot
Since I see this is your first story on Fanfiction I would like to say Welcome :)

You had a nice storyboard which is very good for a first story. You had quite a few grammar mistakes but it's ok we all make them every now and then.

You have potential so you would want to expand that, ne?

But overall, nice fluffy little story D

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