for The Love Affair4/6/2013 c9 
6Inuuichan
The writing style was interesting.
The plot kind of confusing... Seriously, confusing.
6InuuichanThe writing style was interesting.
The plot kind of confusing... Seriously, confusing.
3/29/2013 c9 4MonsterOfCookies
I'm so confused...
I thought this was well written, although some of the sentences were a bit hard to read due to all the dashes. It was well paced and Slade's and Robin's thoughts were perfectly done.
But that last bit, I'm confused. I'm not sure if that's the intention or not. Is he implying it was a dream, or did Robin leave, or what?
I really liked this!(:
4MonsterOfCookiesI'm so confused...
I thought this was well written, although some of the sentences were a bit hard to read due to all the dashes. It was well paced and Slade's and Robin's thoughts were perfectly done.
But that last bit, I'm confused. I'm not sure if that's the intention or not. Is he implying it was a dream, or did Robin leave, or what?
I really liked this!(:
3/28/2013 c9 28Wynja
Wow. Just... wow. The line "Teeth like pearls" reminded me of Peter Pan and this is what this story, especially this last chapter, feels like to me... youth versus age, childishness verses maturity, and magical dreams verses cold, hard reality. I'm not much of an analyst, you know that, so I might be way off, but what this story addressed for ME was the gap between Slade and Robin, the "what would bring them together?" problem we sladin-writers have to struggle with because the age gap WILL mean a real gap between them... Robin might be very mature and very intelligent, but that can never really measure up to the maturity and experience that ONLY comes with age, so the question here is: can Slade overlook that? Could he accept the "teenager" in Robin, or, as this Slade seem to do, will he find him lacking? Argh, I don't even want to think about it too hard, because I WANT them together, of course... ;) But when I do, I will think about this story...
*snicker* and nice inclusion of "eggs" ;)
28WynjaWow. Just... wow. The line "Teeth like pearls" reminded me of Peter Pan and this is what this story, especially this last chapter, feels like to me... youth versus age, childishness verses maturity, and magical dreams verses cold, hard reality. I'm not much of an analyst, you know that, so I might be way off, but what this story addressed for ME was the gap between Slade and Robin, the "what would bring them together?" problem we sladin-writers have to struggle with because the age gap WILL mean a real gap between them... Robin might be very mature and very intelligent, but that can never really measure up to the maturity and experience that ONLY comes with age, so the question here is: can Slade overlook that? Could he accept the "teenager" in Robin, or, as this Slade seem to do, will he find him lacking? Argh, I don't even want to think about it too hard, because I WANT them together, of course... ;) But when I do, I will think about this story...
*snicker* and nice inclusion of "eggs" ;)