for Die Another Day3/3 c19 Jayguns96
Please continue and finish this. U said there’s 5 chapters left and ur last update was in 2020. It was just getting to after the climax too
Please continue and finish this. U said there’s 5 chapters left and ur last update was in 2020. It was just getting to after the climax too
3/1 c9 Jayguns96
Hahahaha. I see what u did in the middle of the chapter and i love you for it from highschool dxd u added the dragons Ophis, Tiamat, Paarthurnax, Bahamut and “the real dragon boss is-“ absolutely hilarious and peak I love it. I hope u continue this story as I see right now that it only has 19 chapters but I’d absolutely love it if u made more chapters and thanks again
Hahahaha. I see what u did in the middle of the chapter and i love you for it from highschool dxd u added the dragons Ophis, Tiamat, Paarthurnax, Bahamut and “the real dragon boss is-“ absolutely hilarious and peak I love it. I hope u continue this story as I see right now that it only has 19 chapters but I’d absolutely love it if u made more chapters and thanks again
2/25 c6 Fiction Haven
IDK, man, this war-torn bitch is too weak. Madara alone, merely an Edo-Tensei, can solo the entire Shinobi Alliance. Then, this bitch got overwhelmed by some randos. I wonder which retard did you consider Naruto (wannabe Madara) and kidnapped.
It's a recurring phenomena too. Naruto in fictions are always retarded and weak. My man is just goofy and not retarded in canon. His progress was greatly hampered by the lack of proper teacher. His only proper teachers were the toads. He learnt the rest by himself and still became the greatest fucking ninja to ever live. But weirdos on this site always make my man retarded and weak.
IDK, man, this war-torn bitch is too weak. Madara alone, merely an Edo-Tensei, can solo the entire Shinobi Alliance. Then, this bitch got overwhelmed by some randos. I wonder which retard did you consider Naruto (wannabe Madara) and kidnapped.
It's a recurring phenomena too. Naruto in fictions are always retarded and weak. My man is just goofy and not retarded in canon. His progress was greatly hampered by the lack of proper teacher. His only proper teachers were the toads. He learnt the rest by himself and still became the greatest fucking ninja to ever live. But weirdos on this site always make my man retarded and weak.
2/23 c19 
1deathrising92
This is an awsome story! Wish it had its ending oh well. Also once I post this review it will be one away from 4,000. Well off to continue browsing the authors storys.
1deathrising92This is an awsome story! Wish it had its ending oh well. Also once I post this review it will be one away from 4,000. Well off to continue browsing the authors storys.
2/1 c6 NamelssGod
Its sad how Akatsuki was first a thing used for peace, then shit with danzo cuase salamander fuck face to go aginst them killing orange hair and then obito getting his slimy hands into that organization ughhhh
Its sad how Akatsuki was first a thing used for peace, then shit with danzo cuase salamander fuck face to go aginst them killing orange hair and then obito getting his slimy hands into that organization ughhhh
2/1 c6 NamelssGod
it dosent happen before the 3rd shinobi war becuase that war is what causes obito to go half n half crazy and im pretty sure its after minato dies becuase i dont think they'd stand for the high loss of life of such valuable people. obito caused that civil war becuase all those blood lines would easily cuase trouble for his plans and just to weaken a nation like that is critical.
it dosent happen before the 3rd shinobi war becuase that war is what causes obito to go half n half crazy and im pretty sure its after minato dies becuase i dont think they'd stand for the high loss of life of such valuable people. obito caused that civil war becuase all those blood lines would easily cuase trouble for his plans and just to weaken a nation like that is critical.
2/1 c3 NamelssGod
thats nots how timetravel works, alright? becuase naruto baka isnt going back to the "future" your present is your present its not your past. you changing kushina and minatos relationship dosent change your future becuase this is your future its not your past.
thats nots how timetravel works, alright? becuase naruto baka isnt going back to the "future" your present is your present its not your past. you changing kushina and minatos relationship dosent change your future becuase this is your future its not your past.
1/7 c3 1bleachorange
Yeah, actually chapter 2 was so bad for me Im bowing out. The storytelling style is pretty terrible, even if the author put more work into than some do.
1bleachorangeYeah, actually chapter 2 was so bad for me Im bowing out. The storytelling style is pretty terrible, even if the author put more work into than some do.
1/7 c2 bleachorange
The writing style in this chapter is pretty terrible. Naruto and Kushina cant stop flirting for more than a paragraph, the action careens from one panic event to another, and the events themselves arent done very well.
The writing style in this chapter is pretty terrible. Naruto and Kushina cant stop flirting for more than a paragraph, the action careens from one panic event to another, and the events themselves arent done very well.
11/19/2024 c18 oldpotato
So he can go slaughter an entire village of thousands and Tsunade just goes "as long as you feel bad and do better next time, let's get ramen!".
What even...
So he can go slaughter an entire village of thousands and Tsunade just goes "as long as you feel bad and do better next time, let's get ramen!".
What even...