for Die Another Day3/28/2013 c1 Guest
Time travel can always be awesome, but I really hate the way you sent him.
To be honest, a "god" becoming involved turns the story down. Whatever happens in the mortal world being "good" or "bad" really shouldn't matter at all, really it's all subjective and "gods" should really stay indifferent... unless they aren't gods of course.
Besides that I liked the chapter, though Naruto fainting is bullshit. I'm quite curious to see where you take the story, and I hope you pair Kushina with Naruto!
Time travel can always be awesome, but I really hate the way you sent him.
To be honest, a "god" becoming involved turns the story down. Whatever happens in the mortal world being "good" or "bad" really shouldn't matter at all, really it's all subjective and "gods" should really stay indifferent... unless they aren't gods of course.
Besides that I liked the chapter, though Naruto fainting is bullshit. I'm quite curious to see where you take the story, and I hope you pair Kushina with Naruto!
3/28/2013 c1 CaliAce17
naruto as a uchiha, concept done but not like this. first chapter is good now just want to see how fugaku react to a new uchiha who is better than him booyah
naruto as a uchiha, concept done but not like this. first chapter is good now just want to see how fugaku react to a new uchiha who is better than him booyah
3/28/2013 c1 
54Alone in the blight
anything for those simple words. the power of world could ressurct and banish entire nations... bioshock was a clear example for that . it is one of the most beautiful games that I had the privilege to play ...
good times :)
now onto to your fic, the concept of death has been vague and elusive till now. none will truly understand its concept the hows and whys... are too afar from our petty understanding of the unseen cogs of the universe .
to write about it... thats something else. I can clearly say that you have decently executed it.
now would YOU kindly check on my poorly written fics :)
kindly done and approved :)
54Alone in the blightanything for those simple words. the power of world could ressurct and banish entire nations... bioshock was a clear example for that . it is one of the most beautiful games that I had the privilege to play ...
good times :)
now onto to your fic, the concept of death has been vague and elusive till now. none will truly understand its concept the hows and whys... are too afar from our petty understanding of the unseen cogs of the universe .
to write about it... thats something else. I can clearly say that you have decently executed it.
now would YOU kindly check on my poorly written fics :)
kindly done and approved :)
3/28/2013 c1 rivereagles999
Like the story, just hope he doesn't go on liking that he has 'Madara' eyes, as you so kindly dubbed them. and how old is everyone. any changed ages?
Like the story, just hope he doesn't go on liking that he has 'Madara' eyes, as you so kindly dubbed them. and how old is everyone. any changed ages?
3/28/2013 c1 byron the fist
mmmm maybe ameyuri or pakura ,shes is be will alive in the third war world ninja mmmm or maybe mei terumi ,she had thrity in the linetime of naruto
mmmm maybe ameyuri or pakura ,shes is be will alive in the third war world ninja mmmm or maybe mei terumi ,she had thrity in the linetime of naruto
3/28/2013 c1 5Renjiyamato
Awesome, can't wait for the next update.
As for pairing it should definitely include Kushina, seeing as he is a Uchiha now it won't be incest.
5RenjiyamatoAwesome, can't wait for the next update.
As for pairing it should definitely include Kushina, seeing as he is a Uchiha now it won't be incest.
3/28/2013 c1 cerxer1
Good story, as for the pairing I would suggest a harem - Mikoto, Kushina, Tsunade, and Tsume are the only ones I can think of.
Good story, as for the pairing I would suggest a harem - Mikoto, Kushina, Tsunade, and Tsume are the only ones I can think of.
3/28/2013 c1 James1996
Call sick...But pair him with Kushina he most likely is not even related to her any more.
Call sick...But pair him with Kushina he most likely is not even related to her any more.
3/28/2013 c1 Tormund117
So are you gonna like make it so Minato doesn't exist at all in this fic? If he does exist in this fic please don't bash him... I don't like basing in general, unless it's the bad guys and if the bashing is rather minimal for the non-bad guys. Anyway, I hope you update this soon rather than taking like a year or 2 to get something out.
So are you gonna like make it so Minato doesn't exist at all in this fic? If he does exist in this fic please don't bash him... I don't like basing in general, unless it's the bad guys and if the bashing is rather minimal for the non-bad guys. Anyway, I hope you update this soon rather than taking like a year or 2 to get something out.
3/28/2013 c1 22edboy4926
Good intro
Looking forward to more
What level is Naruto's Sharingan up to now?
Will Naruto reveal the Rasengan first before his father? Would be interesting to see this.
22edboy4926Good intro
Looking forward to more
What level is Naruto's Sharingan up to now?
Will Naruto reveal the Rasengan first before his father? Would be interesting to see this.
3/28/2013 c1 36Shadow Knight Destroyer
Oh god naruto is gonna be the strongest uchiha since madara, he can stop the Coup
36Shadow Knight DestroyerOh god naruto is gonna be the strongest uchiha since madara, he can stop the Coup