
5/17/2024 c4
19nagiten
interesting
why does he have trepidation for changing the future? he knows he wont erase himself from the timeline. plus he was sent back to change the future in big and small ways

interesting
why does he have trepidation for changing the future? he knows he wont erase himself from the timeline. plus he was sent back to change the future in big and small ways
5/17/2024 c3 nagiten
of course the man would be sterner Naruto he is younger less brought down by his guilt failures and pain and has not yet lived through a second war. plus you are uchiha not a young brat of a uzumaki. oops naruto had a little of the uchiha arrogance
of course the man would be sterner Naruto he is younger less brought down by his guilt failures and pain and has not yet lived through a second war. plus you are uchiha not a young brat of a uzumaki. oops naruto had a little of the uchiha arrogance
5/17/2024 c2 nagiten
naruto naruto why would she ever guess you were her son from the future now a Uchiha? i mean the most likely answer is the one kushina came up with ...gee naruto you really do prove the blonde are dumb thing sometimes and you arent even blonde anymore., ok so he was with sakura? so no hinata confession during the pein attack? no catching Sakura in the lie after Sasuke attacked the summit? ok . plus minato no doubt saw this naruto parents cause well this naruto needs them technically or is he seeing the real naruto? hmm
naruto naruto why would she ever guess you were her son from the future now a Uchiha? i mean the most likely answer is the one kushina came up with ...gee naruto you really do prove the blonde are dumb thing sometimes and you arent even blonde anymore., ok so he was with sakura? so no hinata confession during the pein attack? no catching Sakura in the lie after Sasuke attacked the summit? ok . plus minato no doubt saw this naruto parents cause well this naruto needs them technically or is he seeing the real naruto? hmm
5/17/2024 c1 nagiten
so naruto been naruto didnt listen when the shinigami all but said he was going back in time and not be placed when he left? oh naruto
so naruto been naruto didnt listen when the shinigami all but said he was going back in time and not be placed when he left? oh naruto
4/12/2024 c4 thedankestyeet
...and theres no character development, traight to falling in love...WE DONT EVEN KNOW THE WOMAN...sigh
...and theres no character development, traight to falling in love...WE DONT EVEN KNOW THE WOMAN...sigh
4/12/2024 c4 thedankestyeet
ew so now hes gonna start gaining pride as an uchiha for basically killing someone for no reason.. lmao its so boring when things are excessively overkill, when their personality should stop that from being possible...but i guess not for this storyy
ew so now hes gonna start gaining pride as an uchiha for basically killing someone for no reason.. lmao its so boring when things are excessively overkill, when their personality should stop that from being possible...but i guess not for this storyy
4/12/2024 c3 thedankestyeet
if youre just gonna have naruto do uchiha crap getter than uchiha, there really aint much to read.. what surprise will there even be?
if youre just gonna have naruto do uchiha crap getter than uchiha, there really aint much to read.. what surprise will there even be?
3/28/2024 c15 TheGoodDoctor13
Enjoying the story slot, the random tv/movie references that get shoved in near the last few chapters are pretty off-putting though
Enjoying the story slot, the random tv/movie references that get shoved in near the last few chapters are pretty off-putting though
1/29/2024 c9
9Archangel Change24
I kinda hate the fact that kushina interfered. It really could have ended a lot faster if she hadn’t.

I kinda hate the fact that kushina interfered. It really could have ended a lot faster if she hadn’t.
1/23/2024 c19 Loyal Cassanova
This was fantastic, Please I just need to know the end of this story, but I think this could be extend if it's include other Otsutsuki including Toneri... it's a shame that there were some girls ignored too like Tsume, Yoshino, and other milf woman who are younyer here, like the woman in the star villege, shion's mother, queen Sara, Guren, kumo woman with black skin, etc, etc, etc...
This was fantastic, Please I just need to know the end of this story, but I think this could be extend if it's include other Otsutsuki including Toneri... it's a shame that there were some girls ignored too like Tsume, Yoshino, and other milf woman who are younyer here, like the woman in the star villege, shion's mother, queen Sara, Guren, kumo woman with black skin, etc, etc, etc...