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5/30/2020 c1 lolster11
I have questions XD GREAT STORY (DAT SEX SCENE THOUGH)!
2/24/2020 c1 5Mzuark
OBITO NO! SHE'S A CHILD!
2/21/2016 c1 12Jaque Weasley
Idk what to say. Really I don't... Except this makes me extremely sad and uncomfortable with the part she's underage...
10/11/2014 c1 2LtrDaySaint
A little weird but otherwise a very good story
9/14/2013 c1 10Nogitsunelovesstiles
oh my god i loved it.
4/28/2013 c1 Guest
Type your review here...
4/12/2013 c1 36SierraNovaa
This was pretty good. Great job.
4/10/2013 c1 crazymel2008
sad but interesting.
4/5/2013 c1 zukachan
I love it! I love young Rin with older Obito, I now it's kinda pedo but I don't feel him like that. He's just a man truly dedicated to the love of his life, no matter how many years have passed or if she's a woman or a girl. He loves her with passion and that's all.

ObiRin FTW w
3/29/2013 c1 Composingjealousy
Wow! So much feels.. Im glad to find a decent Obito/Rin fic and I'm excited that he's older Obito . I was all blushing and squealing when they had sex omg like Rin is a young girl and hes a grown up like he would look like a pedo but i dont see him as one anyway? Shsghahjd i cant wait for you too continue!
3/29/2013 c1 15nagatokun
I'm not a big fan of this pairing but this is so sad, and it is pretty much how I imagined all this happening if she was brought back. But I liked this.
3/29/2013 c1 x-DearlyDeparted
This was so beautiful. In fact, it's exactly how I would picture Rin reacting to Obito if this should happen. It was so amazingly written and everything just asl;dk;l.
I loved it! Perfection. More Obirin please. 3
3/29/2013 c1 22WDW
DDDDDD: Dark, disturbing, but still so plausible.
3/29/2013 c1 Marra333
It's amazing , continue doing Obirin fanfics :D
3/29/2013 c1 princess-M
This story was so amazingly written and so sad, i loved it
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