
5/17/2014 c1 Guest
Your grammar isn't very good, and somehow, the summary is kind of humorous. But thank you for dedicating your time to this fanfic. Thank you very much!
Your grammar isn't very good, and somehow, the summary is kind of humorous. But thank you for dedicating your time to this fanfic. Thank you very much!
2/24/2014 c6
1CallmeEevee
Yeah but Russia won the men's luge again -w-
Woot woot!
Haha anyways this story is so dark and I cringe for Kari, I really do. :(

Yeah but Russia won the men's luge again -w-
Woot woot!
Haha anyways this story is so dark and I cringe for Kari, I really do. :(
8/28/2013 c1 LumenHistoire
I am eagerly anticipating your next update. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and chapter 2 me laughing to tears XD Keep up the excellent work!
I am eagerly anticipating your next update. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and chapter 2 me laughing to tears XD Keep up the excellent work!
4/17/2013 c3 Guest
Oh wow! I like the new take you have on original characters. How long has Kari been sailing the seas for and when was the last time she saw Luffy or Ace since before the Marineford incident? Update soon, the story is awesome! :D
Oh wow! I like the new take you have on original characters. How long has Kari been sailing the seas for and when was the last time she saw Luffy or Ace since before the Marineford incident? Update soon, the story is awesome! :D