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4/3/2013 c8 1WhisperedDarkness
Please keep writing! Vincente is one of my all time favourite characters!
4/2/2013 c8 Red Guard Shaka
I like how you are being original. I kinda get bored when i see the main character is Dragon Born. I mean you can be that but it just feels over used.
4/2/2013 c1 Red Guard Shaka
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm looking forward to more i'm on the edge of my seat. I told my self, " I will just read a little i do have class in the morning." now look at me i ended up reading all the chapters. Great riding and your use of words and description is "Crem de la Crem" and "A1" aka Superb!
4/1/2013 c7 54Alone in the blight
lovely and decent. I couldnt ask for more.
though francois was um like uncreative? it's like ulfric naming his son tillius :/
in overall, kindly done and approved :3
4/1/2013 c7 M
Well? Don't stop there! I don't care that we know he has to live(ish). Update soon!
4/1/2013 c6 M
You'd think mages would be aware that everything in that land wants to kill you. Except some of the domestic netches (which still totally vould made them mad).

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
3/30/2013 c4 Jack the reaper
This my friend is gold
And not cheap bronze with golden pigment
Really how did I miss this
I have no criticism
Which is rare to the point of extinction
3/30/2013 c4 Alone in the blight
So far so good, decent narration and plot no doubt but you tend to ignore description pretty often .
do update soon dear, kindly done and approved :)
3/30/2013 c1 Alone in the blight
kinda sucks to get a silent fav/follow no?
anyways, I do hope not to see another fan girls vampire.
but for now, kindly done and approved :)
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