for Broken7/24/2014 c3 Bramble
I'd say this is one of your bests. Intriguing it is simply.
I'd say this is one of your bests. Intriguing it is simply.
4/1/2013 c1 
3ponyiowa
[How could she save and convince the clans when even StarClan doesn't believe she can do it? Summary sux! XD So pls give it a chance!]
It's "Clans," not "clans."
And hey, I think your summary's pretty good. But if you don't think so, you can come to WillowClan for help. ;)
Interesting prologue. It does a nice job of drawing me in.
-Ponyiowa
-Nightstar of WillowClan
3ponyiowa[How could she save and convince the clans when even StarClan doesn't believe she can do it? Summary sux! XD So pls give it a chance!]
It's "Clans," not "clans."
And hey, I think your summary's pretty good. But if you don't think so, you can come to WillowClan for help. ;)
Interesting prologue. It does a nice job of drawing me in.
-Ponyiowa
-Nightstar of WillowClan
3/30/2013 c1 Guest
Continue!
Continue!
3/31/2013 c2 6Silent Song of Stirring Storms
Great story so far! Please update soon! :D I wanna know what just happened!
6Silent Song of Stirring StormsGreat story so far! Please update soon! :D I wanna know what just happened!