
3/15/2015 c5 Guest
The thing about Doctor Who fanfics is that everything and everyone is all happy and OOC. Oh look at that! Amy's dying! Wait! She isn't! She's a Time Lady and has reappeared (using regeneration) young and ginger back on the TARDIS! And now Clara and 11 have seen her, and take it all in their stride as if it's an every day thing. Then, surprise! Clara's a Time Lady too, Rory is alive using his now non-existence Auton powers, and is now immortal. Then Jenny is there. No way! She's a Time Lady as well!? It's all a one big happy family this, isn't it?! And then the Master turns up, which is where I stop reading, as this story is just... BLEURGH!
Thankfully, this story has none of that! So congrats! I love this! Will you update again? It's just getting started and I want to know what happens next!
Apologies if I upset anyone with that rant, but I needed to get that out... Sorry!
Please update!
The thing about Doctor Who fanfics is that everything and everyone is all happy and OOC. Oh look at that! Amy's dying! Wait! She isn't! She's a Time Lady and has reappeared (using regeneration) young and ginger back on the TARDIS! And now Clara and 11 have seen her, and take it all in their stride as if it's an every day thing. Then, surprise! Clara's a Time Lady too, Rory is alive using his now non-existence Auton powers, and is now immortal. Then Jenny is there. No way! She's a Time Lady as well!? It's all a one big happy family this, isn't it?! And then the Master turns up, which is where I stop reading, as this story is just... BLEURGH!
Thankfully, this story has none of that! So congrats! I love this! Will you update again? It's just getting started and I want to know what happens next!
Apologies if I upset anyone with that rant, but I needed to get that out... Sorry!
Please update!
7/30/2014 c1 TheEleventhDrUk
I have read all the chapters and I nearly cried on the docs dream (dunno why?) but do more!
I have read all the chapters and I nearly cried on the docs dream (dunno why?) but do more!
5/19/2014 c5
4SecretOfTheVortex
This is really good, i haven't read fanfic this good in a long time. More please.

This is really good, i haven't read fanfic this good in a long time. More please.
7/18/2013 c4 LNA
Can you update this please
Can you update this please
4/24/2013 c1
10ShilohHolmes
I love the story so far! The scene between Amy and the Doctor was fantastic and I like how you portrayed his emotion and reluctance to travel with the Ponds again. You've got to write more, okay?

I love the story so far! The scene between Amy and the Doctor was fantastic and I like how you portrayed his emotion and reluctance to travel with the Ponds again. You've got to write more, okay?