for A Frozen Heart4/1/2013 c1 
1stardustandrainbows
Wow. Really enjoyed that; it was pacy and I loved how you ended each section with "She was only a girl of..." which I thought made it very powerful. You portray Ravenna's motivations and how she became how she did excellently and I would definitely read more of your writing. Great work and I look forward to reading future stories from you! :)
1stardustandrainbowsWow. Really enjoyed that; it was pacy and I loved how you ended each section with "She was only a girl of..." which I thought made it very powerful. You portray Ravenna's motivations and how she became how she did excellently and I would definitely read more of your writing. Great work and I look forward to reading future stories from you! :)