for This Is How It Should Be1/6/2014 c4 tvlover84
I find it hard to connect with this though because I don't like the kids names! But it's a cute story!
I find it hard to connect with this though because I don't like the kids names! But it's a cute story!
1/5/2014 c4 Guest
This worships Annie too much. You know she's real with flaws right?
This worships Annie too much. You know she's real with flaws right?
7/23/2013 c2 
4vainhopes
This is excellent, as per your usual standard.
I have to be honest...I'm replying to this chapter in particular, even though I've read the three currently available because this one gets me right in the feels. As a stay-at-home dad as I complete some higher education...I wish I was a lot more like Annie, but fear I'm far closer to Mrs. Edison. This story is emotionally evocative enough that I've started trying to keep it as a mental touchstone when I find my kids driving me nuts as I try to finish a project, and then I try to see if I can just stay up a little later to finish it, and spend the time with them "now."
You have a talent for conveying situations that could come across as contrived and corny in an excellent way.
4vainhopesThis is excellent, as per your usual standard.
I have to be honest...I'm replying to this chapter in particular, even though I've read the three currently available because this one gets me right in the feels. As a stay-at-home dad as I complete some higher education...I wish I was a lot more like Annie, but fear I'm far closer to Mrs. Edison. This story is emotionally evocative enough that I've started trying to keep it as a mental touchstone when I find my kids driving me nuts as I try to finish a project, and then I try to see if I can just stay up a little later to finish it, and spend the time with them "now."
You have a talent for conveying situations that could come across as contrived and corny in an excellent way.
7/23/2013 c3 5sabea28
This story hits home for me because of the parts about Jeff and Annie's past because I spent a lot of time growing up like they did- and now I'm crying because I always said if I had kids they would not be raised like I was. So this story makes me feel so much better. Also makes me jealous of Zack and Hazel so good job! I enjoy this series :)
5sabea28This story hits home for me because of the parts about Jeff and Annie's past because I spent a lot of time growing up like they did- and now I'm crying because I always said if I had kids they would not be raised like I was. So this story makes me feel so much better. Also makes me jealous of Zack and Hazel so good job! I enjoy this series :)
4/28/2013 c2 Karl
This story is just adorable. I want to see Jeff's POV next
This story is just adorable. I want to see Jeff's POV next
4/7/2013 c1 anon
such a nice story, please write another with these two being married :)
such a nice story, please write another with these two being married :)