for Caught9/21/2013 c1 anonymous
This is a very cool idea. You might want to have someone proofread it a few more times, though. There were some run-on sentences and misspellings.
This is a very cool idea. You might want to have someone proofread it a few more times, though. There were some run-on sentences and misspellings.
8/10/2013 c1 Guest
You have to continue
You have to continue
8/12/2013 c1 
7AwesomeRedVampire
Please, please, please continue this. Germany is my favorite character and it pains me to see you leave him hanging like this. Please make this longer.
7AwesomeRedVampirePlease, please, please continue this. Germany is my favorite character and it pains me to see you leave him hanging like this. Please make this longer.
4/1/2013 c1 15Katie-Kat1129
It's a good story and plot, and I am curious about what else might happen, but I think you should go back through and do some spelling, grammar and punctuation check. Other than that, it's a very good story!
15Katie-Kat1129It's a good story and plot, and I am curious about what else might happen, but I think you should go back through and do some spelling, grammar and punctuation check. Other than that, it's a very good story!