
4/23 c1 dillie60
That was such a sweet story. I really loved Beth here she and Carl are cute. Aww Andrea walking with Daryl was so nice. Thank you.
That was such a sweet story. I really loved Beth here she and Carl are cute. Aww Andrea walking with Daryl was so nice. Thank you.
6/18/2016 c1 gdyoung59
loved it specially the ending. rick/michonne/carl/beth/daryl/andrea. no one can make it alone.
loved it specially the ending. rick/michonne/carl/beth/daryl/andrea. no one can make it alone.
6/14/2014 c1 Nadineoo
holy shit! what an absolutely beautiful ending. andrea, in her straw hat and all.. thanks for writing such an authentic "richonne" fic.
holy shit! what an absolutely beautiful ending. andrea, in her straw hat and all.. thanks for writing such an authentic "richonne" fic.
5/19/2014 c1 Alex311
Please write more about this story. I love the Michonne and Rick relationship!
Please write more about this story. I love the Michonne and Rick relationship!
6/14/2013 c1 Brandon
you should make this into a multi-chapter, this has a fairly decent amount of room to expand.
you should make this into a multi-chapter, this has a fairly decent amount of room to expand.
4/26/2013 c1
15ImOrca
"She was just...giving them some adult supervision...without their knowledge." *snicker* This strikes me as exactly Michonne's sense of humor.
"Michonne could read his body langauge, Rick would always do the same thing when she talked with him." I totally noticed Chandler Riggs doing this at the end of the season - mimicking Andrew Lincoln's mannerisms. It was pretty awesome, I thought. Added authenticity to the story here, too.
I'm sweet on Beth/Carl, which I really enjoyed here. :)

"She was just...giving them some adult supervision...without their knowledge." *snicker* This strikes me as exactly Michonne's sense of humor.
"Michonne could read his body langauge, Rick would always do the same thing when she talked with him." I totally noticed Chandler Riggs doing this at the end of the season - mimicking Andrew Lincoln's mannerisms. It was pretty awesome, I thought. Added authenticity to the story here, too.
I'm sweet on Beth/Carl, which I really enjoyed here. :)
4/15/2013 c1 Brandon
I like the section you did on beth and carl, have you ever thought of doing fanfics of beth and carl, looks like you would be good at it.
I like the section you did on beth and carl, have you ever thought of doing fanfics of beth and carl, looks like you would be good at it.
4/14/2013 c1
6The Scribe2
I really liked this. It felt very realistic. I liked how you brought Beth to life. She doesn't seem to get enough written about her. Great job.

I really liked this. It felt very realistic. I liked how you brought Beth to life. She doesn't seem to get enough written about her. Great job.
4/6/2013 c1
7SuperNeos2
So the surprise guest was Andrea... I thought it would be T-Dog, :)
Great Rick/Michonne and Carl/Beth here and the subtle hint of Daryl/Andrea

So the surprise guest was Andrea... I thought it would be T-Dog, :)
Great Rick/Michonne and Carl/Beth here and the subtle hint of Daryl/Andrea
4/6/2013 c1
2xHellsYeahDixonne
Wow this is so well written. I love what you did with everyone. I would love to see this turned into more than a one shot.

Wow this is so well written. I love what you did with everyone. I would love to see this turned into more than a one shot.
4/4/2013 c1 GeminiCross
This story just seems so...natural. I can't explain it in words-but this would probably make a great book if published.
This story just seems so...natural. I can't explain it in words-but this would probably make a great book if published.