6/6/2015 c3 Chapter 4
I've been waiting for a year XD for chapter 4, plz write it soon.
I've been waiting for a year XD for chapter 4, plz write it soon.
8/28/2014 c2 bob jones
awwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute
awwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute
12/7/2013 c3 Ember the Exalted
Keep it up! Can you also use Dovewing's POV? Wow...Flamepelt sucks but Bumblestripe, Win Over Honeysuckle and I want to see the look on Dovewing's face when she sees Honeysuckle and Bumbkestripe hunting together. Alone. Hehehe
Flamepelt...find another cat my friend how about...Sunkit (forgot if she's a girl )
Keep it up!
Keep it up! Can you also use Dovewing's POV? Wow...Flamepelt sucks but Bumblestripe, Win Over Honeysuckle and I want to see the look on Dovewing's face when she sees Honeysuckle and Bumbkestripe hunting together. Alone. Hehehe
Flamepelt...find another cat my friend how about...Sunkit (forgot if she's a girl )
Keep it up!
8/5/2013 c2 Darkblaze
I dont really like soon!
I dont really like soon!
6/24/2013 c2 cathsjoker
I have to say, Bumblestripe and Honeysuckle seems interesting. Sometimes I think Dovewing doesn't deserve him since she ignored a nice sweet caring tom while mooning over Tigerheart.
I have to say, Bumblestripe and Honeysuckle seems interesting. Sometimes I think Dovewing doesn't deserve him since she ignored a nice sweet caring tom while mooning over Tigerheart.
4/5/2013 c2 Whatsy
YAYAYAYA A SEQUEL! Awesome! :D But the first chapter isn't really a chapter, and you could get your story reported, so I think you should remove it.
YAYAYAYA A SEQUEL! Awesome! :D But the first chapter isn't really a chapter, and you could get your story reported, so I think you should remove it.
4/5/2013 c1 17Heterica's Oldaccount.hacked
Dear author, let it be noted that the first chapter contains no story.
Dear author, let it be noted that the first chapter contains no story.