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9/3/2017 c1 69Ariyah
Definitely one of the best characterizations of Jack Frost I've seen. Kudos! You've captured his elation, his suppression of loneliness, and his gnawing ache to just know /why/.

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1/25/2015 c1 22BlackBandit111
I have no words. This is just...wow.
8/22/2013 c1 15FaerieRing
I love the way you expressed Jack's need to be seen and feel like he has a place in this world. It also can easily relate to every day life and how we strive to fit in and have a place in this world. All in all, the best Jack Frost poem I've read yet.
6/13/2013 c1 7sarafine-ecleips
You're good!
4/6/2013 c1 JustPlainOldMe
This was a beautiful poem. It was simple, which added to the beauty of it, and captured Jack's thoughts and emotions perfectly.
4/6/2013 c1 4redolivia
Wow this is some really good poetry. This must have taken ages, it all fits so well *looks in wonderment* You are poetry god * bows down humbly, while quietly pondering whether wonderment is in fact a word*
4/6/2013 c1 xxXTempestXxx
I enjoyed this poem.

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