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7/30/2013 c1 Guest
Try harder :(
7/25/2013 c7 1Zombiarpi
Do you have anyone to show your stories, before you publish them? They could tell you if the story has some bad grammar, plot-holes etc. I always show my stories to my big sister. If you have problems in writing, like I usually have, try checking some tips from Google, write different versions of the story and think does it make sense, what you wrote.
It doesn't matter how old you are. I'm 13 too.
This fanfic is quite good, for a first story. I admit, that there are some parts I don't understand, Xena for example, but if you keep writing, you can write stories, that don't have plot-holes or things like that, stories that are awesome.
(btw, you shouldn't write A/N in it's own chapter. It's against the site rules/whatever they're called)
7/12/2013 c7 1Harry-Flashman
Finishing beats stopping, and stopping trumps never starting. Remember that and be proud of your work. Sincerely.
6/19/2013 c6 1MiniMonstahh
Why? I hoped Jeffrey and her... He called her Mommy...
6/19/2013 c6 4Seville
This is one of the stupidest stories I've ever read. It started out alright and then dissolved into a horrible mess with the worst ending possible.
5/8/2013 c4 Guest
update
4/9/2013 c3 Guest
update
4/6/2013 c1 Guest
update plz

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