for Poke'Legend9/25 c3 Guest
Tangela and rufflet
Tangela and rufflet
8/24 c8 Uriel IL
Buenas compañero, me preguntaba, cuando volverás a actualizar este fanfic, es muy interesante, lo espero pronto!
Buenas compañero, me preguntaba, cuando volverás a actualizar este fanfic, es muy interesante, lo espero pronto!
8/27/2022 c1 Andrew
Hey man I love this story and hope you continue I've just reread the first chapter and all the other hoenn pokemon you listed should just make them narutos pokemon but put a few shinies like beldom and snowrunt.
Hey man I love this story and hope you continue I've just reread the first chapter and all the other hoenn pokemon you listed should just make them narutos pokemon but put a few shinies like beldom and snowrunt.
10/19/2021 c8 
1Baahubali321
Awesome story! Like how narutos parents are still alive, and all his cool Pokémon, escpecially deoxys and ralts. Bit iffy on how they best rayquaza but that’s small issue. Plz update I like this a lot!
1Baahubali321Awesome story! Like how narutos parents are still alive, and all his cool Pokémon, escpecially deoxys and ralts. Bit iffy on how they best rayquaza but that’s small issue. Plz update I like this a lot!
10/11/2021 c8 Phantom Frost
Wish there was another chapter to this it was a fun read Its been close to 8 years since this chapter was posted and from how long ago some of your works were last updated im guessing you dont write on here anymore unfortunately
Wish there was another chapter to this it was a fun read Its been close to 8 years since this chapter was posted and from how long ago some of your works were last updated im guessing you dont write on here anymore unfortunately
1/23/2021 c8 Guest
es una historia muy buena por favor continuala
es una historia muy buena por favor continuala
1/15/2021 c1 Genesis zero
More chapters it's to cool to stop
More chapters it's to cool to stop
8/2/2020 c8 Guest
I hope you continue this story as for the pokemon Naruto should capture in the next regions I would suggest...
Alola: Litten, Jangmo-o, Alolan Sandshrew, Dhelmise, Wimpod, Alolan Vulpix, Rockruff, Salandit (female)
Galar: Galarian Zigzagoon, Galarian Ponyta, Grookey, Scorbunny, Sobble, Yamper, Rookiedee, Dreepy, Rolycoly, Silicobra
These are my suggestions as for May you should have her travel with Naruto after the Battle Frontier arc. As for the pokemon she should capture besides canon I would suggest...
Kanto: Oddish, Ponyta, Tangela, Doduo, Magnemite, Nidoran (female)
Johto: Misdreavus, Chikorita, Mareep, Miltank, Smoochum, Marill
Sinnoh: Bronzor, Burmy, Mime Jr.
Unova: Purloin, Petili, Cottonee, Panpour, Gothita, Ducklett, Deerling
Kalos: Espurr, Carbink, Litleo (female), Skrelp, Skiddo, Spritzee
Alola: Popplio, Mimikyu, Stufful, Wishiwashi, Fomantis
Galar: Gossifleur, Morpeko, Applin, Hatenna, Snom
Keep up the great work.
I hope you continue this story as for the pokemon Naruto should capture in the next regions I would suggest...
Alola: Litten, Jangmo-o, Alolan Sandshrew, Dhelmise, Wimpod, Alolan Vulpix, Rockruff, Salandit (female)
Galar: Galarian Zigzagoon, Galarian Ponyta, Grookey, Scorbunny, Sobble, Yamper, Rookiedee, Dreepy, Rolycoly, Silicobra
These are my suggestions as for May you should have her travel with Naruto after the Battle Frontier arc. As for the pokemon she should capture besides canon I would suggest...
Kanto: Oddish, Ponyta, Tangela, Doduo, Magnemite, Nidoran (female)
Johto: Misdreavus, Chikorita, Mareep, Miltank, Smoochum, Marill
Sinnoh: Bronzor, Burmy, Mime Jr.
Unova: Purloin, Petili, Cottonee, Panpour, Gothita, Ducklett, Deerling
Kalos: Espurr, Carbink, Litleo (female), Skrelp, Skiddo, Spritzee
Alola: Popplio, Mimikyu, Stufful, Wishiwashi, Fomantis
Galar: Gossifleur, Morpeko, Applin, Hatenna, Snom
Keep up the great work.
7/26/2020 c8 Guest
keep this going it is good
keep this going it is good
3/28/2020 c1 3AlernateReality
Yup, some absolute bs having Naruto catch Raquaza. Honestly, if that team could catch a Legendary they'd all be caught by other trainers in the past who have stronger pokemon. Nerfing a legendary like so off the bat makes the rest of the story seem a bit cheap and unrealistic.
Seriously, it drives me insane that people of trainers catch legendaries so easily in stories (not in just naruto x pokemon crossovers but all pokemon fanfics). Now, if it were canon Naruto at the end of 4th Shinobi War I can understand but seriously, many a trainer would have caught Legendaries if that is all it took
3AlernateRealityYup, some absolute bs having Naruto catch Raquaza. Honestly, if that team could catch a Legendary they'd all be caught by other trainers in the past who have stronger pokemon. Nerfing a legendary like so off the bat makes the rest of the story seem a bit cheap and unrealistic.
Seriously, it drives me insane that people of trainers catch legendaries so easily in stories (not in just naruto x pokemon crossovers but all pokemon fanfics). Now, if it were canon Naruto at the end of 4th Shinobi War I can understand but seriously, many a trainer would have caught Legendaries if that is all it took
5/21/2019 c8 BigMat
Continue this story its the best in the franchise
Continue this story its the best in the franchise