
4/8/2013 c1
1Silvdra-zero
interesting story
as for the sixth pokemon to Naruto's team
either Deoxys or Jirachi seem a bit like over kill to me...
since he already has Rayquaza, even though he is not going to unleash that dragon any time soon in this story, I bet
that and the fact that Naruto has such a legendary is not yet known gives both of them a surprise factor for the fabled 'shock and awe'
so I vote for Feebas and/or Absol
reasons are because I don't see any decent enough pokemon/Naruto crossovers to where Naruto gains a Feebas and painfully works into making the pokemon into a Milotic
as for the Absol, well the choice would be a little more symbolic
since a disaster took him away from his parents and it lead to his current team, plus the symbolism would also indirectly extend to his canon incarnation
since Absol are pokemon that people keep at arms length, relatively and figuratively speaking, and are generally something to be wary of
plus it wouldn't exactly hurt to have a 'tsundere' pokemon on Naruto's team
it may add a bit of flair, but that's just my opinion and your choice
overall fantastic start and I look forward to the next chapter

interesting story
as for the sixth pokemon to Naruto's team
either Deoxys or Jirachi seem a bit like over kill to me...
since he already has Rayquaza, even though he is not going to unleash that dragon any time soon in this story, I bet
that and the fact that Naruto has such a legendary is not yet known gives both of them a surprise factor for the fabled 'shock and awe'
so I vote for Feebas and/or Absol
reasons are because I don't see any decent enough pokemon/Naruto crossovers to where Naruto gains a Feebas and painfully works into making the pokemon into a Milotic
as for the Absol, well the choice would be a little more symbolic
since a disaster took him away from his parents and it lead to his current team, plus the symbolism would also indirectly extend to his canon incarnation
since Absol are pokemon that people keep at arms length, relatively and figuratively speaking, and are generally something to be wary of
plus it wouldn't exactly hurt to have a 'tsundere' pokemon on Naruto's team
it may add a bit of flair, but that's just my opinion and your choice
overall fantastic start and I look forward to the next chapter
4/8/2013 c1 NiwaTG
Well, that was certainly interesting. Naruto already has a godlike team so soon into his adventure lol he'll probably be able to capture all the legendary Pokemon at some point. Out of the two for his sixth Pokemon I can't decide since they would both be interesting to have aboard.
Well, keep up the good work.
Well, that was certainly interesting. Naruto already has a godlike team so soon into his adventure lol he'll probably be able to capture all the legendary Pokemon at some point. Out of the two for his sixth Pokemon I can't decide since they would both be interesting to have aboard.
Well, keep up the good work.
4/8/2013 c1 Warwolf16
deoxys just cause its deoxys x3. but seriously i feel deoxys would benefit from having a friend like naruto
deoxys just cause its deoxys x3. but seriously i feel deoxys would benefit from having a friend like naruto
4/8/2013 c1
3Storylover213
i say go with Deoxys its different battle forms would help Naruto out Immensely i would also go with a Beldum Bagon Absol and Aron as Naruto's pokemon as they complement his style

i say go with Deoxys its different battle forms would help Naruto out Immensely i would also go with a Beldum Bagon Absol and Aron as Naruto's pokemon as they complement his style