for Pack of Six8/26/2013 c2 hypersreak
I liked this chapter too. Just like Ton to try to steal food haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter _
I liked this chapter too. Just like Ton to try to steal food haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter _
5/14/2013 c2 
35Newtinmpls
Well, I admit the whole bloat being related to exercise after eating is new to me. What I've understood is that it's seen in dogs that only eat dog food. Dogs on a raw diet, or even ones that seem to get a decent amount of "real" food (I'm not talking 'people food' necessarily, but better quality than the processed-foodlike-product that is passed off as dog food these days.
Sorry for the ramble - you are provoking thought, and it's really good. I totally can see Tony peeing on an outlet.
35NewtinmplsWell, I admit the whole bloat being related to exercise after eating is new to me. What I've understood is that it's seen in dogs that only eat dog food. Dogs on a raw diet, or even ones that seem to get a decent amount of "real" food (I'm not talking 'people food' necessarily, but better quality than the processed-foodlike-product that is passed off as dog food these days.
Sorry for the ramble - you are provoking thought, and it's really good. I totally can see Tony peeing on an outlet.
4/10/2013 c1 60Leo of Nohr
Aww... You are right though, there are a lot of mistakes, but I think all it really needs is a quick edit. It's mainly just missing letters and words. I think that something that would be really cool is just a oneshot on an average day for the avengers dogs. 'Cause six calm, normal dogs are hard to handle, six abnormal and hyperactive dogs would be fun to read.
60Leo of NohrAww... You are right though, there are a lot of mistakes, but I think all it really needs is a quick edit. It's mainly just missing letters and words. I think that something that would be really cool is just a oneshot on an average day for the avengers dogs. 'Cause six calm, normal dogs are hard to handle, six abnormal and hyperactive dogs would be fun to read.
4/9/2013 c1 35Newtinmpls
Adorably done, although I have no idea what most of the breeds are. I was kind of expecting that Bruce would be a Pit of some kind, shy, sweet and at odd points when defending his pack, utterly insanely fearless. Gotta say I also really buy the characterization of Ross. One last thing - grammar issues. Just change everything to past tense and it'll read a bit more smoothly
35NewtinmplsAdorably done, although I have no idea what most of the breeds are. I was kind of expecting that Bruce would be a Pit of some kind, shy, sweet and at odd points when defending his pack, utterly insanely fearless. Gotta say I also really buy the characterization of Ross. One last thing - grammar issues. Just change everything to past tense and it'll read a bit more smoothly