9/15/2016 c1 Tater Tots
One of my favorite Grimm's fairy tales :) Poor John, he always seems to get the short end of the stick! But if he had known, he probably would have given the game away on accident. Seems a little OOC for Mycroft to go out of his way to comfort him, but that's what fanfic is for :)
On the other hand, I love the flow of their conversation and especially Mycroft's parting sally.
Rating: 6.0 on the Richter scale! (FOR THE LOVE OF JOHN'S MUSTACHE!)
One of my favorite Grimm's fairy tales :) Poor John, he always seems to get the short end of the stick! But if he had known, he probably would have given the game away on accident. Seems a little OOC for Mycroft to go out of his way to comfort him, but that's what fanfic is for :)
On the other hand, I love the flow of their conversation and especially Mycroft's parting sally.
Rating: 6.0 on the Richter scale! (FOR THE LOVE OF JOHN'S MUSTACHE!)
11/30/2015 c1 Tenebris.Rosis
I like it very much... I used to love that story when I was a child! I think it was a marvelous idea
I like it very much... I used to love that story when I was a child! I think it was a marvelous idea
6/28/2013 c1 5imkerfuffled
Wow. Love it. Makes me want to cry a bit & hug everyone.
Mycroft practicing his own mysterious brand of comfort... not OOC at all!
Wow. Love it. Makes me want to cry a bit & hug everyone.
Mycroft practicing his own mysterious brand of comfort... not OOC at all!
4/10/2013 c1 Honourable
You have the voices right and the story, whilst short, is engaging. Please consider continuing to write in this fandom. And, especially, thank you for using one of the finest stories in the Grimm collection on devotion and sibling love. Quite nicely done! Congratulations.
You have the voices right and the story, whilst short, is engaging. Please consider continuing to write in this fandom. And, especially, thank you for using one of the finest stories in the Grimm collection on devotion and sibling love. Quite nicely done! Congratulations.
4/10/2013 c1 16JillianWatson1058
This is really well done. I like how you used a Grimm fairy tale; fits perfectly with reichenbach :) Good job!
This is really well done. I like how you used a Grimm fairy tale; fits perfectly with reichenbach :) Good job!
4/10/2013 c1 126Book girl fan
Imperfect, in that Sherlock is not a girl, and he only had half as many people to save. But still, that comparison revealed more that intended, methinks.
Imperfect, in that Sherlock is not a girl, and he only had half as many people to save. But still, that comparison revealed more that intended, methinks.