for going back in time12/15/2015 c2 Guest
You desperatly need a beta. AND spell check is your friend.
This is a solid story idea, however t is replete with spelling and grammar errors...and not little ones.
You desperatly need a beta. AND spell check is your friend.
This is a solid story idea, however t is replete with spelling and grammar errors...and not little ones.
9/22/2014 c1 Guest
You didnt lose Jake, you threw him under the bus. You knew it all, soo you got what you wanted. Just didnt want what you got. Oh yeah you need a beta the idea is good the execution is not
You didnt lose Jake, you threw him under the bus. You knew it all, soo you got what you wanted. Just didnt want what you got. Oh yeah you need a beta the idea is good the execution is not
2/19/2014 c1 zafriah's bff nm
capital letters
capital letters
9/18/2013 c5 Guest
Wat the hell zafarty im annoyed continue noww! I wanna know is jacobs dream is the bella man i will marry your taylor lautner is you do not continue
Hibster your sexy genorous not-so-abusive-hitting-kiking in the legg-sexual abusing friend
Wat the hell zafarty im annoyed continue noww! I wanna know is jacobs dream is the bella man i will marry your taylor lautner is you do not continue
Hibster your sexy genorous not-so-abusive-hitting-kiking in the legg-sexual abusing friend
9/18/2013 c1 Guest
When are you making a new chapter zafarty
When are you making a new chapter zafarty
6/19/2013 c4 Guest
cmon chapter 5 where is it!
cmon chapter 5 where is it!
4/23/2013 c3 still me fool C
i like it but at times i didnot understand what u ment look through it and correct it if you can
i like it but at times i didnot understand what u ment look through it and correct it if you can