for When the Wolf Runs5/6/2013 c23 Charlotte Marie
PRICELESS
PRICELESS
5/8/2013 c24 makiva
For a writer-blocked chapter of a first fanfic this is magnificent. You stuffed such dark stuff in here and yet it reads without any difficulty. Angst-but-not-exactly plus romance great read.
Travelling alone does no good for Rose. That's one of the reasons the Doctor has companions - to get him out of bad situations (still not over 'Turn Left'. Should probably watch the episodes in chronological order, but that hardly matters since Tumblr does not have River-y anti-spoiler policies). Ahem. Magnificent chapter, as said already. Would beg for a quick update, but since you write so fast, that's kinda unnesessary. :)
For a writer-blocked chapter of a first fanfic this is magnificent. You stuffed such dark stuff in here and yet it reads without any difficulty. Angst-but-not-exactly plus romance great read.
Travelling alone does no good for Rose. That's one of the reasons the Doctor has companions - to get him out of bad situations (still not over 'Turn Left'. Should probably watch the episodes in chronological order, but that hardly matters since Tumblr does not have River-y anti-spoiler policies). Ahem. Magnificent chapter, as said already. Would beg for a quick update, but since you write so fast, that's kinda unnesessary. :)
5/8/2013 c24 
3charm13insomnia
hmm well hope they don't forget the rings
and god that poor girl first see's a witch take down a monster then gets her bernt at the stake and then finds out that she has condemd a holy warrior
if that dosn't mess you up for life nothing will
looking forwards to the next chapter
3charm13insomniahmm well hope they don't forget the rings
and god that poor girl first see's a witch take down a monster then gets her bernt at the stake and then finds out that she has condemd a holy warrior
if that dosn't mess you up for life nothing will
looking forwards to the next chapter
5/7/2013 c24 Flute1516
I love this chapter! Of course, I love your entire fic, but especially this chapter. I'm excited to see how you end it, but at the same time I don't want it to end. I hope you update soon!
I love this chapter! Of course, I love your entire fic, but especially this chapter. I'm excited to see how you end it, but at the same time I don't want it to end. I hope you update soon!
5/7/2013 c24 2BYoshi1993
I swear, while reading all of this, all I could think about was I hope Rose gets the rings back...
Great chapter though. I'm glad the Doctor finally confessed his feeling formally.
2BYoshi1993I swear, while reading all of this, all I could think about was I hope Rose gets the rings back...
Great chapter though. I'm glad the Doctor finally confessed his feeling formally.
5/7/2013 c24 63The Alternative Source
Damn girl...that was pretty harsh. When the flames started going up her dress I was flipping out over here! You did a really great job with the description and inner monologue in this chapter. Honestly I think it was your best chapter. And man...Rose waking up and the Doctor holding her after helping her die. That was the breaking point. He needed to get it out and tell her that he loved her. Fantastic chapter.
63The Alternative SourceDamn girl...that was pretty harsh. When the flames started going up her dress I was flipping out over here! You did a really great job with the description and inner monologue in this chapter. Honestly I think it was your best chapter. And man...Rose waking up and the Doctor holding her after helping her die. That was the breaking point. He needed to get it out and tell her that he loved her. Fantastic chapter.
5/7/2013 c24 KyLupas
Loved it and can't wait for what's to come... You have a talent but don't rush (I say thinking can't wait till the next chapter) your block will go and ideas will flow when ready. Have enjoyed your spin on things and possible avenues your story takes.
Loved it and can't wait for what's to come... You have a talent but don't rush (I say thinking can't wait till the next chapter) your block will go and ideas will flow when ready. Have enjoyed your spin on things and possible avenues your story takes.
5/7/2013 c24 Qapleulia
What? NO! I don't want this amazing story to end! YOU BETTER MAKE IT GOOD IF IT'S GOING TO END NEXT CHAPTER!
What? NO! I don't want this amazing story to end! YOU BETTER MAKE IT GOOD IF IT'S GOING TO END NEXT CHAPTER!
5/7/2013 c24 4Adele365
Oh, my... At least awkward stalker Doctor is gone. The scene with Accalia getting burned at the stake was really painful and well-written. Great chapter!
4Adele365Oh, my... At least awkward stalker Doctor is gone. The scene with Accalia getting burned at the stake was really painful and well-written. Great chapter!
5/7/2013 c24 Spooths
If it is the last chapter, I hope there is a sequel. This is one of the best fics I've read in a long time.
If it is the last chapter, I hope there is a sequel. This is one of the best fics I've read in a long time.
5/5/2013 c22 Guest
lol give HER time! get it? he has a time machine
lol give HER time! get it? he has a time machine