5/5/2013 c21 Guest
why is everyone dying?! so sad, but so good!
why is everyone dying?! so sad, but so good!
5/5/2013 c20 Guest
at the end. is that angels take manhattan?
at the end. is that angels take manhattan?
5/5/2013 c22 Charlotte Marie
I GET BUSY FOR,LIKE, TWO DAYS AND THERE ARE THREE NEW CHAPTERS UP?!
I GET BUSY FOR,LIKE, TWO DAYS AND THERE ARE THREE NEW CHAPTERS UP?!
5/5/2013 c22 Kylah
This is sooo great! Keep updating!
This is sooo great! Keep updating!
5/6/2013 c23 4ocean-of-ink
I like this chapter, though I do think the Doctor is getting a little bit creepy in following Rose like that. It seems just a little too much like he's turning into the sort of ex-boyfriend who follows her around trying to convince her to get back together when she already said no. (I know that's not why he's doing it, and he has her best interests at heart and all that, but it still seems kind of off.)
I like this chapter, though I do think the Doctor is getting a little bit creepy in following Rose like that. It seems just a little too much like he's turning into the sort of ex-boyfriend who follows her around trying to convince her to get back together when she already said no. (I know that's not why he's doing it, and he has her best interests at heart and all that, but it still seems kind of off.)
5/6/2013 c23 63The Alternative Source
I love those moments when you're glaring at someone. And you're so pissed off. And then you start laughing. Laughing because its so ridiculous. It's so funny. And it's so right.
I love those moments when you're glaring at someone. And you're so pissed off. And then you start laughing. Laughing because its so ridiculous. It's so funny. And it's so right.
5/6/2013 c23 Dreamcatcher56
thanks for the laugh...it was a nice break for both of them and maybe a bit of hope for the future.
thanks for the laugh...it was a nice break for both of them and maybe a bit of hope for the future.
5/6/2013 c23 6I-want-a-shrubbery
i love how you're making it gradual because so many stories rush into it and try and make everything like it was before. this is so much more realistic. it's brilliant.
i love how you're making it gradual because so many stories rush into it and try and make everything like it was before. this is so much more realistic. it's brilliant.
5/6/2013 c23 5Riannya
This was a right bit of fun! Just the right amount of angst and hope. UST is in all the right places, I really can't wait to read how you bring it all together.
This was a right bit of fun! Just the right amount of angst and hope. UST is in all the right places, I really can't wait to read how you bring it all together.
5/4/2013 c21 Keep updating
I love this story so much!
I love this story so much!
5/4/2013 c21 Guest
can't wait but at the same time I don't want this story to end!
can't wait but at the same time I don't want this story to end!