
4/25/2013 c11
4Adele365
...somehow I find myself wondering who I'm sorrier for, rose for being captured or Madame Kovarian when she finally realized just how much she's bitten off more than she can chew. Rose might have gotten ambushed, but Bad wolf's gonna eat that bitch for breakfast. Hehe... Anyway great chapter!

...somehow I find myself wondering who I'm sorrier for, rose for being captured or Madame Kovarian when she finally realized just how much she's bitten off more than she can chew. Rose might have gotten ambushed, but Bad wolf's gonna eat that bitch for breakfast. Hehe... Anyway great chapter!
4/25/2013 c11 supernena25
I wanted the baby to go back to Rory and Amy for once, I feel bad for them and Rose it's gonna feel really guilty about it. I hope Rory doesn't blame her.
I wonder what they're gonna do to Rose
I wanted the baby to go back to Rory and Amy for once, I feel bad for them and Rose it's gonna feel really guilty about it. I hope Rory doesn't blame her.
I wonder what they're gonna do to Rose
4/25/2013 c11 MargauxUniverse
Honestly i am hooked, its so great your updating everyday, it would be torture otherwise! I am SO curious about the whole Rose now being the one to kill the Doctor, its such a great idea! I'm really wondering how the Doctors gonna take it when he finds out, i also hope River has a happier story now, Great writing, i'm reading everyday. :)
Honestly i am hooked, its so great your updating everyday, it would be torture otherwise! I am SO curious about the whole Rose now being the one to kill the Doctor, its such a great idea! I'm really wondering how the Doctors gonna take it when he finds out, i also hope River has a happier story now, Great writing, i'm reading everyday. :)
4/25/2013 c11
2Godric'sGrl01
I really liked all your authors notes, especially your delighted cackle when you get a review email! So funny! Makes you sound like an evil witchy writer! Lol!
Love your Rosé, gritty and hard, but still able to help others and not be too cynical. Loved her interactions with Rory and Jack. She's not completely lost. Jack's tough love approach with Doctor was a str

I really liked all your authors notes, especially your delighted cackle when you get a review email! So funny! Makes you sound like an evil witchy writer! Lol!
Love your Rosé, gritty and hard, but still able to help others and not be too cynical. Loved her interactions with Rory and Jack. She's not completely lost. Jack's tough love approach with Doctor was a str
4/25/2013 c11
30agentsofthemcu
Okay.. starting to think the little thing in the summary is a lie. This is too freaking amazing to be a first fanfic... seriously, it's BRILLIANT!

Okay.. starting to think the little thing in the summary is a lie. This is too freaking amazing to be a first fanfic... seriously, it's BRILLIANT!
4/24/2013 c11
6Krazzy Kezz
hoooooooly shit. firstly, its about time i stopped being lazy ad actually posted a review, coz this story is freaking epic! it is by far my favourite story at the moment and i just LOVE how quickly you update! but holy heck, you were right, all help certainly broke loose! cant wait to see where this is going, please post again really soon! kezz

hoooooooly shit. firstly, its about time i stopped being lazy ad actually posted a review, coz this story is freaking epic! it is by far my favourite story at the moment and i just LOVE how quickly you update! but holy heck, you were right, all help certainly broke loose! cant wait to see where this is going, please post again really soon! kezz
4/24/2013 c11
17You Light The Sky
ALL OF MY HEART AND MY SOUL AND MY LIFE I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. NO. NO. NOOOOOOOOO. ROSEEE. ROSE, NOOOO.
That was incredible. It's also tragic that Rory and Rose have become such good friends and it's Rose's desire to help Rory (even if it means seeing the Doctor again, accidentally) that lands her in this position and IT'S SO TRAGIC. I LOVE AND HATE IT AND ITSDKFJSDFo. I just wonder what Rory was thinking during the war on Demon's Run. I wonder if he thought of where Larentia might be, if he was angry at first because she promised she'd come but he didn't see her there.
I wonder if he knows that Rose has been captured by teh Silence (does this mean she has to kill the Doctor? And River does have a normal childhood-well, as normal as she can have in an orphanage? But then how does River regenerate later? I sdlfjsdfoisjdfskfsdhdf.) I can't imagine what torture they'll inflict on poor Rose. I fear for her and I hope that Rory wonders where she is. I hope that River Song appears to Amy and Rory later and tells them something, anything.
Oh my gosh, Jack's role in this chapter is great and also heartbreaking, especially with the line in the song "friendship dies and true love lies" as Jack has to protect baby Melody while Rose is lying to her Doctor, hiding herself from him. I just have so many feels.
Rory and Rose, their epic friendship. Jack and Rose, theire wonderful sibling-like bond. The Doctor and Rose, suffering so much. River and her parents, seperated unjustly. This was beautifully written. I screamed at the computer. It was well-written and just... wow.
All my feels. You are wonderful.

ALL OF MY HEART AND MY SOUL AND MY LIFE I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. NO. NO. NOOOOOOOOO. ROSEEE. ROSE, NOOOO.
That was incredible. It's also tragic that Rory and Rose have become such good friends and it's Rose's desire to help Rory (even if it means seeing the Doctor again, accidentally) that lands her in this position and IT'S SO TRAGIC. I LOVE AND HATE IT AND ITSDKFJSDFo. I just wonder what Rory was thinking during the war on Demon's Run. I wonder if he thought of where Larentia might be, if he was angry at first because she promised she'd come but he didn't see her there.
I wonder if he knows that Rose has been captured by teh Silence (does this mean she has to kill the Doctor? And River does have a normal childhood-well, as normal as she can have in an orphanage? But then how does River regenerate later? I sdlfjsdfoisjdfskfsdhdf.) I can't imagine what torture they'll inflict on poor Rose. I fear for her and I hope that Rory wonders where she is. I hope that River Song appears to Amy and Rory later and tells them something, anything.
Oh my gosh, Jack's role in this chapter is great and also heartbreaking, especially with the line in the song "friendship dies and true love lies" as Jack has to protect baby Melody while Rose is lying to her Doctor, hiding herself from him. I just have so many feels.
Rory and Rose, their epic friendship. Jack and Rose, theire wonderful sibling-like bond. The Doctor and Rose, suffering so much. River and her parents, seperated unjustly. This was beautifully written. I screamed at the computer. It was well-written and just... wow.
All my feels. You are wonderful.
4/24/2013 c10 Spooths
I think it would be interesting if Rose would figure out a way to remember the Silence.
I think it would be interesting if Rose would figure out a way to remember the Silence.
4/22/2013 c8 Guest
Awesome story! I just read this all in one sitting and my only compliant is that there wasn't anymore to read haha
Awesome story! I just read this all in one sitting and my only compliant is that there wasn't anymore to read haha
4/23/2013 c10
17You Light The Sky
OH MY GOD AGAIN. FANGIRLING OVER THE RORY AND ROSE MEETING.
The Doctor's pov at the beginning of the chapter is amusing as he looks for Rose. I do wonder what his relationship with older River is. Perhaps they're friends. And River hasn't given any indication of knowing Rose yet so I can't say... but oh, I'm nervous and excited to see what you come up with : )
OH my gosh, the Doctor is going to die at Lake Silencio anyways! That's rather frightening. It makes me wonder if the Silence are aware of Larentia's presence. If they could break into the Doctor's TARDIS, what if they break into Larentia's? Who would save her?
Fangirling once more at the Rory and Rose meeting. Rose is always saving him but yes, I agree with her, I do think I prefer the bears better! lol! I love how confused she was about the Silence (they are rather frightening) and how Rory was concerned about Larentia's eating habits. Rose is so protective of her Centurion friend. It makes me excited to see her and Amy meet someday, but I do hope it's under good circumstances.
Poor Rose, still so broken and not ready to meet her Doctor. Rory is right, Rose is rather lucky for him, his own Fortuna. Oh gosh, the next chapter all hell breaks loose? That makes me nervous, I wonder if it's the Demon's run chapter (panics and fangirls at the same time.)
By the way, your tumblr link doesn't show up so I can't follow you D: Could you send me your user name so I can add you? I'm ms-notebook by the way :D
AWESOME as usual! You are so great at updating and writing this wonderful AU, sldkfjsodf

OH MY GOD AGAIN. FANGIRLING OVER THE RORY AND ROSE MEETING.
The Doctor's pov at the beginning of the chapter is amusing as he looks for Rose. I do wonder what his relationship with older River is. Perhaps they're friends. And River hasn't given any indication of knowing Rose yet so I can't say... but oh, I'm nervous and excited to see what you come up with : )
OH my gosh, the Doctor is going to die at Lake Silencio anyways! That's rather frightening. It makes me wonder if the Silence are aware of Larentia's presence. If they could break into the Doctor's TARDIS, what if they break into Larentia's? Who would save her?
Fangirling once more at the Rory and Rose meeting. Rose is always saving him but yes, I agree with her, I do think I prefer the bears better! lol! I love how confused she was about the Silence (they are rather frightening) and how Rory was concerned about Larentia's eating habits. Rose is so protective of her Centurion friend. It makes me excited to see her and Amy meet someday, but I do hope it's under good circumstances.
Poor Rose, still so broken and not ready to meet her Doctor. Rory is right, Rose is rather lucky for him, his own Fortuna. Oh gosh, the next chapter all hell breaks loose? That makes me nervous, I wonder if it's the Demon's run chapter (panics and fangirls at the same time.)
By the way, your tumblr link doesn't show up so I can't follow you D: Could you send me your user name so I can add you? I'm ms-notebook by the way :D
AWESOME as usual! You are so great at updating and writing this wonderful AU, sldkfjsodf