1/21/2015 c12 43Von
It wasn't till last chapter that Rose was described as brunette and not blonde. Caused a mental reboot. And now in this one she's described with a ponytail instead of a braid. Guh!
It wasn't till last chapter that Rose was described as brunette and not blonde. Caused a mental reboot. And now in this one she's described with a ponytail instead of a braid. Guh!
1/21/2015 c6 Von
Aww, Miss whatsisface and the other universe is sad - you're so evil! - but DO LOVE RORY!
Aww, Miss whatsisface and the other universe is sad - you're so evil! - but DO LOVE RORY!
1/21/2015 c3 Von
I spent the whole chapter thinking Alaric was a Vinvocci. I'm a bit sad that he isn't. Still! I like him too and hope he gets to be a first companion for Rose.
I spent the whole chapter thinking Alaric was a Vinvocci. I'm a bit sad that he isn't. Still! I like him too and hope he gets to be a first companion for Rose.
12/28/2014 c25 Serendipity989
You would think with how many rise and doctor stories there are that ones like this are actually a rare find. Say the ones that are very well written and there both not love sick fools during the entire thing. For a first fanfiction you did an absolute amazing job. I very much look forward to reading other stories you may come up with. Fantastic job!
Serendipity989
You would think with how many rise and doctor stories there are that ones like this are actually a rare find. Say the ones that are very well written and there both not love sick fools during the entire thing. For a first fanfiction you did an absolute amazing job. I very much look forward to reading other stories you may come up with. Fantastic job!
Serendipity989
12/28/2014 c1 Serendipity989
Holy Hell! That's one heck of an intro! Very much looking forward to reading the rest of it!
Holy Hell! That's one heck of an intro! Very much looking forward to reading the rest of it!
12/18/2014 c19 7Painted Orchid
I just wanted to let you know how brilliant this is. Your darker, more scarred Rose is perfect. I've seen some other stories with a character change like that, but it has always been too abrupt, too complete. Your Rose-Accalia- has all of the qualities that made her a unique person (stubbornness, compassion, loyalty) but she has also grown up a bit. It is a brilliant progression in character development. She has become better and worse all at once and it's a fascinating, exciting ride. I also love the role that River plays as Accalia's surrogate daughter. Love reading this!
I just wanted to let you know how brilliant this is. Your darker, more scarred Rose is perfect. I've seen some other stories with a character change like that, but it has always been too abrupt, too complete. Your Rose-Accalia- has all of the qualities that made her a unique person (stubbornness, compassion, loyalty) but she has also grown up a bit. It is a brilliant progression in character development. She has become better and worse all at once and it's a fascinating, exciting ride. I also love the role that River plays as Accalia's surrogate daughter. Love reading this!
12/2/2014 c25 mecaka
I love this story so much! :)
I love this story so much! :)
11/3/2014 c23 Guest
I cannot describe how much I love this fanfiction. It's written without flaw and is spot on with all the caracters. I would have loved to see more Amy though. Great job!
I cannot describe how much I love this fanfiction. It's written without flaw and is spot on with all the caracters. I would have loved to see more Amy though. Great job!
6/2/2014 c25 12Crystalzap
everything Rose went through made me sad, and the name changing was dizzying, but I'm glad they got a happy ending
everything Rose went through made me sad, and the name changing was dizzying, but I'm glad they got a happy ending
4/15/2014 c25 Kathryn Hart
Wow, just...wow. I wish my first fabric had been this good. It seems like all my story alerted stories are being refused to update, so sinking my teeth into this gave me insurmountable pleasure. I'll start from the beginning I guess. I really liked Alaric, would have liked to see him become a companion but I knew it was at the wrong time. I was frankly shocked Rose killed an entire universe but I've never seen that before, so kudos for that. I do not think her meeting the Centurion was at all overdone, nor was she raising Mels. That wisely avoided the whole Doctor/River romance thing (gags) Rose going Bad Wolf crazy was frightening and well written. I think the very last line here is my favorite line. Fantastic story, and sorry for the long review! Katy
Wow, just...wow. I wish my first fabric had been this good. It seems like all my story alerted stories are being refused to update, so sinking my teeth into this gave me insurmountable pleasure. I'll start from the beginning I guess. I really liked Alaric, would have liked to see him become a companion but I knew it was at the wrong time. I was frankly shocked Rose killed an entire universe but I've never seen that before, so kudos for that. I do not think her meeting the Centurion was at all overdone, nor was she raising Mels. That wisely avoided the whole Doctor/River romance thing (gags) Rose going Bad Wolf crazy was frightening and well written. I think the very last line here is my favorite line. Fantastic story, and sorry for the long review! Katy