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8/3/2014 c11 glo
this chapter is really well written. I was totally crying by the end. still am actually.
8/3/2014 c66 4Xion5
Oh man that was hilarious! XD Seriously that was awesome, one of my favorite chapters by far in this story just for that sarcastic martini bit!
Please try and update the next chapter soon because I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/3/2014 c66 Guest
imagine jack and pierre as kirk and bones /yes
8/3/2014 c66 9x-smith
there is something both very wrong, and very amusing about this chapter. if Tooth ever finds out what the 'house-warming gift' was, she'll be mortified. look forward to the next update!
8/3/2014 c66 5DearlyFictitious
This is gonna be good
8/2/2014 c66 2JustThinkingOutloud
I liked this chapter; it also gave the message that you can't change who people really are, so good job! Thank you! Please update whenever you can! ;)
7/29/2014 c18 sparky
i did not know they swung that way... huh
7/29/2014 c17 sparky
bunny got schooled! woop woop! It's true, they don't really seem to care much about others do they?
7/29/2014 c16 sparky
wow, hhaha. jack was higher than a kite! that's hilarious, i love it!
7/29/2014 c15 sparky
seriously, lets go beat up karma
7/29/2014 c14 sparky
can we go after karma? how about we all just stop believing in her, see how that feels
7/29/2014 c13 sparky
you're going to leave it like that? WHYYY?
7/29/2014 c12 sparky
this was adorable! i like how you twisted it in the end to show what can be don with the children, very awesome
7/29/2014 c11 sparky
sad, but happy ending! awesome job. and i always wondered. did they have to eat? or was it just for fun like cookies and stuff?
7/29/2014 c10 sparky
I love Pierre! jack needs a friend . ths is cute!
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