for The Intertwining Journey of Two Heros in One Timeline2/2/2020 c2 Reader
It has been a long time, I read this fandom fanfiction story. I'm interested, and its sounds promosing story. I like it. Pleasee keep the update, don't abandon this story :))
It has been a long time, I read this fandom fanfiction story. I'm interested, and its sounds promosing story. I like it. Pleasee keep the update, don't abandon this story :))
7/24/2019 c2 Guest
Love the story. Please update real soon.
Love the story. Please update real soon.
2/13/2019 c2 Guest
this story I find this to be great... It's like I've said on other before they cancel themselves I've always found myself pondering who get the final kill Ratatosk or Lloyd on Yggdraisll as with Ratatosk I used to find myself pondering what was his relationship with him Yggdraisll was one of those I despise your guts or I may say but I don't fully mean it...
this story I find this to be great... It's like I've said on other before they cancel themselves I've always found myself pondering who get the final kill Ratatosk or Lloyd on Yggdraisll as with Ratatosk I used to find myself pondering what was his relationship with him Yggdraisll was one of those I despise your guts or I may say but I don't fully mean it...
8/7/2018 c2 apples in the rain
Ooooh, you’re blending both games’ stories together :O Hehe, that’s something I like to wonder about. I’ve got my own ideas, but I seldom see writers tackle it, and your ideas are so different! I’m surprised to see Yuan as an open traitor; I’ve always seen him as a subtle machinator. And no, that doesn’t bother me one bit. I love seeing different perspectives. Color me intrigued :)
And Tenebrae sounds very Tenebrae ;)
Ooooh, you’re blending both games’ stories together :O Hehe, that’s something I like to wonder about. I’ve got my own ideas, but I seldom see writers tackle it, and your ideas are so different! I’m surprised to see Yuan as an open traitor; I’ve always seen him as a subtle machinator. And no, that doesn’t bother me one bit. I love seeing different perspectives. Color me intrigued :)
And Tenebrae sounds very Tenebrae ;)
6/4/2018 c2 
7Dr.Bob
OK. Wasn't expecting this. Wellcome back!
I don't remember this fanfic but looking at my old reviews it looks like I liked it so I will give it a chance for sure. I was following it after all.
With the Vanguard not being the villains I can't wait what Decus and Alice might be up to. (If they are in, I hope they are in the fanfic).
Anyway, less about what I would like and more about what you have done. The chapter seems short but it's ok. Uploads will make up for it. As far as the plot goes, it has just started so I won't say anything yet. Can't wait for the next update.
7Dr.BobOK. Wasn't expecting this. Wellcome back!
I don't remember this fanfic but looking at my old reviews it looks like I liked it so I will give it a chance for sure. I was following it after all.
With the Vanguard not being the villains I can't wait what Decus and Alice might be up to. (If they are in, I hope they are in the fanfic).
Anyway, less about what I would like and more about what you have done. The chapter seems short but it's ok. Uploads will make up for it. As far as the plot goes, it has just started so I won't say anything yet. Can't wait for the next update.
6/25/2016 c3 2MagdaleneSinner
Your story has a good idea but try to flesh out your writing. Also more detail but other than that I liked your story please continue to write more.
MagdaleneSinner
2MagdaleneSinnerYour story has a good idea but try to flesh out your writing. Also more detail but other than that I liked your story please continue to write more.
MagdaleneSinner
12/15/2015 c7 7Dr.Bob
WOOOOOOHUUUUUU! This is me when I see that there is a new chapter.
Awwwwww... This is me after finishing it. Don't worry, is not that I didn't like it, it's just that I found it short and would like more :)
I would have liked to see a little more development in the friendship department. Not just: "They became friends". Aside of that nice chapter. Keep it up!
7Dr.BobWOOOOOOHUUUUUU! This is me when I see that there is a new chapter.
Awwwwww... This is me after finishing it. Don't worry, is not that I didn't like it, it's just that I found it short and would like more :)
I would have liked to see a little more development in the friendship department. Not just: "They became friends". Aside of that nice chapter. Keep it up!
10/6/2015 c6 Dr.Bob
My biggest concern about this fanfic is how the fanfic chapters and your chapters don't get along. When I check the reviews I don't know if I reviewed the ff ch.3 or your ch.3 XD.
Anyway, the chapter is fine and enjoyable,maybe a little sort, aside of that I have no complain, everyone seems to be in character. I have not much more to say since this seem to be a development chapter, which is fine by me. Keep it up.
My biggest concern about this fanfic is how the fanfic chapters and your chapters don't get along. When I check the reviews I don't know if I reviewed the ff ch.3 or your ch.3 XD.
Anyway, the chapter is fine and enjoyable,maybe a little sort, aside of that I have no complain, everyone seems to be in character. I have not much more to say since this seem to be a development chapter, which is fine by me. Keep it up.
8/1/2015 c4 Dr.Bob
The premise it's interesting, and I will keep an eye on this. I just hope you didn't forget about my two favourite characters: Alice and Decus. (You mentionned every ToS:DotNW main characters but them)
The premise it's interesting, and I will keep an eye on this. I just hope you didn't forget about my two favourite characters: Alice and Decus. (You mentionned every ToS:DotNW main characters but them)
4/26/2013 c2 10Microtoa
Nice inspiration with an doctor. But for Richter he doesn't have to brag about the future isn't he?
10MicrotoaNice inspiration with an doctor. But for Richter he doesn't have to brag about the future isn't he?
4/18/2013 c2 rAoMe
Hm...Interesting, though i do enjoy the after and beginning notes just a bit too much...
Hm...Interesting, though i do enjoy the after and beginning notes just a bit too much...
4/14/2013 c1 6DennyTribal
I really like the idea for this story and I'm very interested in reading more. A little OOCness is nothing I don't really bother about seeing as I tend to write them OOC as well. But I think it just brings more charm to the story sometimes. It's not the same old all the time.
I hope to read more of this!
6DennyTribalI really like the idea for this story and I'm very interested in reading more. A little OOCness is nothing I don't really bother about seeing as I tend to write them OOC as well. But I think it just brings more charm to the story sometimes. It's not the same old all the time.
I hope to read more of this!