for Emerald Eyed Supernova12/26/2019 c2 ds382486
I love ur story. Please think about updating in the future I’d love to read more of this story.
I love ur story. Please think about updating in the future I’d love to read more of this story.
9/5/2018 c2 
31529
I have to admit to being less than impressed with Harry's reaction at the beginning of this chapter... there really isn't any excuse for rudeness of the level that Harry showed to someone who considered him a friend (I'd say the reverse is not true... I wouldn't be a friend with anyone that would be that rude to even strangers, let alone friends).
The 'animal traits' you're is pretty well used and, on the surface there is nothing wrong with it... but when these traits are simply used by a character to excuse their actions (especially socially) it gets pretty old, pretty quickly. Even going with that excuse, all animals will at least acknowledge other animals without going straight from ignore to fury.
There were reasonable ways to develop the plot line as happened in this chapter, but this wasn't one of them.
31529I have to admit to being less than impressed with Harry's reaction at the beginning of this chapter... there really isn't any excuse for rudeness of the level that Harry showed to someone who considered him a friend (I'd say the reverse is not true... I wouldn't be a friend with anyone that would be that rude to even strangers, let alone friends).
The 'animal traits' you're is pretty well used and, on the surface there is nothing wrong with it... but when these traits are simply used by a character to excuse their actions (especially socially) it gets pretty old, pretty quickly. Even going with that excuse, all animals will at least acknowledge other animals without going straight from ignore to fury.
There were reasonable ways to develop the plot line as happened in this chapter, but this wasn't one of them.
2/20/2017 c2 OllyOllyOxycodone
Irina and Kate, Harry is OOC, and Tonks' back story is meh. Not surprised you dropped this.
Irina and Kate, Harry is OOC, and Tonks' back story is meh. Not surprised you dropped this.
11/16/2016 c2 Rossin
This story is intriguing and the first two chapters are extremely well written. It's a shame you haven't continued it, but thanks for the enjoyable read.
This story is intriguing and the first two chapters are extremely well written. It's a shame you haven't continued it, but thanks for the enjoyable read.
9/23/2016 c2 Blazeb79
Very cool start! But why no updates? I always knew ron was a mega-punk-motherfu$)$ i always hated him!
Very cool start! But why no updates? I always knew ron was a mega-punk-motherfu$)$ i always hated him!
8/27/2016 c2 Guest
Update please.
Update please.
7/8/2016 c2 ShadowEonEclipseChaos
ABSOLUTELY LOVE this tale thus far!
Looking forward to its continuation!
Update soon PLEASE!
ABSOLUTELY LOVE this tale thus far!
Looking forward to its continuation!
Update soon PLEASE!
4/29/2016 c2 Shadowdog11
Good explanation of the multi-mates before it could occur. I liked the whole demonstration of the griffin changes in general. Maybe you'll find motivation to write again one day!
Good explanation of the multi-mates before it could occur. I liked the whole demonstration of the griffin changes in general. Maybe you'll find motivation to write again one day!