for THE UNDELETABLE PAST7/3/2003 c8 
1Jaja
Hello! Sorry that I didn't review your fic earlier^^ I've read your fic once before, but that was before the last chapter updated. Neway, what an angst ridden fic you've got here! But it's good, nevertheless^^ You're quite poetic with your words, which for me, is inspiring. And I've kind of wondered what is it that the nurse was about to tell Rukawa. Has he a chronic disease? Please don't kill him! Keep up the good work, okay? It's been quite some time since you last updated. Ganbatte!
1JajaHello! Sorry that I didn't review your fic earlier^^ I've read your fic once before, but that was before the last chapter updated. Neway, what an angst ridden fic you've got here! But it's good, nevertheless^^ You're quite poetic with your words, which for me, is inspiring. And I've kind of wondered what is it that the nurse was about to tell Rukawa. Has he a chronic disease? Please don't kill him! Keep up the good work, okay? It's been quite some time since you last updated. Ganbatte!
6/24/2003 c8 kiku
What's happened to Rukawa? What'd the blood tell us? Ah...you surely have a good technique to stop a chapter...
Well, how long should I wait this time for your update?
What's happened to Rukawa? What'd the blood tell us? Ah...you surely have a good technique to stop a chapter...
Well, how long should I wait this time for your update?
3/20/2003 c8 michiko13
haha even though i'n in aussie i still read your story yah!
please please finich the next cahppie soon.. you're leaving me in suspense here..
how's life back home?
see you soon k!
haha even though i'n in aussie i still read your story yah!
please please finich the next cahppie soon.. you're leaving me in suspense here..
how's life back home?
see you soon k!
2/28/2003 c2 18Pi-Kyu
thanks for bugging my life with all those reviews and I don't mean to write secretly, just cannot remember to tell you. Just hope this thing reach you in time before you jump to another conclusion.
And ah, I'm not really into love thingy. Just a mere inspiration.
18Pi-Kyuthanks for bugging my life with all those reviews and I don't mean to write secretly, just cannot remember to tell you. Just hope this thing reach you in time before you jump to another conclusion.
And ah, I'm not really into love thingy. Just a mere inspiration.
2/1/2003 c8 18Pi-Kyu
Mysterious would be the perfect word to describe this chappie. Sigh.
Anyway, just to inform you, Meteor Garden also stands for Hana Yori Dango. Go check it out.
18Pi-KyuMysterious would be the perfect word to describe this chappie. Sigh.
Anyway, just to inform you, Meteor Garden also stands for Hana Yori Dango. Go check it out.
12/27/2002 c7 Pi-Kyu
Happy birthday!
Yet another excellent chapter from you!
Just can't wait for the next!
Got to go, ja mata!
Happy birthday!
Yet another excellent chapter from you!
Just can't wait for the next!
Got to go, ja mata!
12/26/2002 c7 4rejected-pen
Ish, I'm not Hui Wan, I'm Wei Yin...T_T. So what happened after that? @_@ Is somebody gonna snatch/steal it[wristband] before she gives it or did she give to someone else? or she lost it or or she used it for herself?
4rejected-penIsh, I'm not Hui Wan, I'm Wei Yin...T_T. So what happened after that? @_@ Is somebody gonna snatch/steal it[wristband] before she gives it or did she give to someone else? or she lost it or or she used it for herself?
12/22/2002 c6 renei
Nicki,
The first five chapters of your story really made me sad... the words you used are very descriptive, which is nice in the story. And goodness, there is a PLOT! Finally... not just, erm, same old love triangle, like my story... anyway, the length of your chapters are just right and the way you end it poems keeps the reader intrigued. What is going to happen in the next chapter, anyway?
And for once, the girl is not flirting back with Sendoh. I do hope he isn’t ‘hurt’ because he was rejected by aiji. She has one hell of a personality... why don’t you make aiji kill eshiri in the next chapter? That bitch truly deserves to die if she did that to her friend.
Very nicely written... but the first five chapters had some typos, and you have gotten over that in the last one. No, don’t be offended by that comment. Your story is a nice read, and don’t worry if you aren’t getting the number of reviews you expected. Readers in the Slam Dunk genre usually prefer the ‘humor’ section... therefore overlooking the fact that there are beautifully woven stories like these.
renei
by the way, your option is still switched to the “Do not accept anonymous reviews”... hmmm... I thought you said you unchecked that one already?
Nicki,
The first five chapters of your story really made me sad... the words you used are very descriptive, which is nice in the story. And goodness, there is a PLOT! Finally... not just, erm, same old love triangle, like my story... anyway, the length of your chapters are just right and the way you end it poems keeps the reader intrigued. What is going to happen in the next chapter, anyway?
And for once, the girl is not flirting back with Sendoh. I do hope he isn’t ‘hurt’ because he was rejected by aiji. She has one hell of a personality... why don’t you make aiji kill eshiri in the next chapter? That bitch truly deserves to die if she did that to her friend.
Very nicely written... but the first five chapters had some typos, and you have gotten over that in the last one. No, don’t be offended by that comment. Your story is a nice read, and don’t worry if you aren’t getting the number of reviews you expected. Readers in the Slam Dunk genre usually prefer the ‘humor’ section... therefore overlooking the fact that there are beautifully woven stories like these.
renei
by the way, your option is still switched to the “Do not accept anonymous reviews”... hmmm... I thought you said you unchecked that one already?
12/21/2002 c1 rejected-pen
[ Hui Wan using Wei Yin's account ]
hoi!.. beh pai ah ur story.. read it a lot of times di.. but tak nampak the kucik rat punya review button...
wat to do... old di la.. mata apa pun tak nampak..
yea... go go slam dunk...
go go sakuragi.. how come no sakuragi wan...?
aku peminat setia sakuragi kayz.. so i wanna see some action ya... tat's all la..
nice story... oh ya.. go NONA !
tat's all chiaoz
- Mother of all HAIWANS -
[ Hui Wan using Wei Yin's account ]
hoi!.. beh pai ah ur story.. read it a lot of times di.. but tak nampak the kucik rat punya review button...
wat to do... old di la.. mata apa pun tak nampak..
yea... go go slam dunk...
go go sakuragi.. how come no sakuragi wan...?
aku peminat setia sakuragi kayz.. so i wanna see some action ya... tat's all la..
nice story... oh ya.. go NONA !
tat's all chiaoz
- Mother of all HAIWANS -
12/19/2002 c6 michiko13
this chapter a bit sad la... i'm wondering if you're going to create a love triangle
this chapter a bit sad la... i'm wondering if you're going to create a love triangle
12/11/2002 c6 18Pi-Kyu
Yo! Just read finish your fic. Just wanna say a few thing... Is Sendoh going to fall for Aiji? This question been prying on my mind ever since you mention him. And to think you are rebellious against him...yikes! But you know what they say, hatred usually starts from negative source and then slowly as time drone by it turns into passion...and you know, loves...hehehe. I'm not saying you LIKE Sendoh, maybe a change of attitude towards his character? Inuoe-san had certainly potrait him as a wonder ace player with girls going ga-ga over for him and perhaps it has a same effect on you but it seemed to work slower, nevertheless effective. *Grins* It's up to you though. After all you are the author, not me. I just a mere reader, with gormless anticipation with every chapter you post. Just can't for your next chapter. Adios!
18Pi-KyuYo! Just read finish your fic. Just wanna say a few thing... Is Sendoh going to fall for Aiji? This question been prying on my mind ever since you mention him. And to think you are rebellious against him...yikes! But you know what they say, hatred usually starts from negative source and then slowly as time drone by it turns into passion...and you know, loves...hehehe. I'm not saying you LIKE Sendoh, maybe a change of attitude towards his character? Inuoe-san had certainly potrait him as a wonder ace player with girls going ga-ga over for him and perhaps it has a same effect on you but it seemed to work slower, nevertheless effective. *Grins* It's up to you though. After all you are the author, not me. I just a mere reader, with gormless anticipation with every chapter you post. Just can't for your next chapter. Adios!