for Harry Potter and the Knight of the Radiant Heart4/3 c15 peggy77
I will leave a review - this is one of the reason I will only read Completed stories. The other is because so many are never completed. Or the first one ends up being completed but the sequel never is.
I will leave a review - this is one of the reason I will only read Completed stories. The other is because so many are never completed. Or the first one ends up being completed but the sequel never is.
12/13/2024 c35 
3Lucifer The Archangel
Add this to my review of the epilogue, too many cool characters were just killed and written off. Tonks had no reason to die. Buckbeak had no reason. Cho's alright, she can go, but like half of the names of the dead were just unnecessary. Buckbeak definitely should've lived, could've had the epilogue with him standing beside him, a toe to Sirius, to his mentor, to his way of life, and to a battle that had helped and hurt so many.
3Lucifer The ArchangelAdd this to my review of the epilogue, too many cool characters were just killed and written off. Tonks had no reason to die. Buckbeak had no reason. Cho's alright, she can go, but like half of the names of the dead were just unnecessary. Buckbeak definitely should've lived, could've had the epilogue with him standing beside him, a toe to Sirius, to his mentor, to his way of life, and to a battle that had helped and hurt so many.
12/13/2024 c36 Lucifer The Archangel
Great fic, but the last few chapters felt really rushed and honestly the tonal shift wasn't done well. It just doesn't leave you satisfied, and doesn't really feel resolved or well written towards the end. 9/10 overall
Great fic, but the last few chapters felt really rushed and honestly the tonal shift wasn't done well. It just doesn't leave you satisfied, and doesn't really feel resolved or well written towards the end. 9/10 overall
5/14/2024 c3 Guest
Oh God, somebody slap the living fuck out of Harry and remind him that Luna saw her mother die in front if her.. that Hermione was nearly killed by being a loyal friend & following him...that Susan Bones entire family, minus her aunt, was wiped out by death eaters...that Neville's parents were tortured into insanity and that they don't even recognize their son. I HATE this iteration of "woe is me, I'm the only one because my troubles are so unique that I can shelve myself off from anybody else". Sanctimonious little fuck. I already want to beat the living hell out of him for being such a fucking cunt right now.
Yes, so far, I like the story.
Oh God, somebody slap the living fuck out of Harry and remind him that Luna saw her mother die in front if her.. that Hermione was nearly killed by being a loyal friend & following him...that Susan Bones entire family, minus her aunt, was wiped out by death eaters...that Neville's parents were tortured into insanity and that they don't even recognize their son. I HATE this iteration of "woe is me, I'm the only one because my troubles are so unique that I can shelve myself off from anybody else". Sanctimonious little fuck. I already want to beat the living hell out of him for being such a fucking cunt right now.
Yes, so far, I like the story.