for Chem Reb Gen Two9/17/2014 c1 
7Arivania Moons
I think you should continue this one too. It's really cool. You are an awesome writer with these!
7Arivania MoonsI think you should continue this one too. It's really cool. You are an awesome writer with these!
3/31/2014 c1 H
More, More I want More. Update both stories real soon please.
More, More I want More. Update both stories real soon please.
11/12/2013 c1 Guest
update this man please it is good
update this man please it is good
4/16/2013 c1 Ardianna Keeper
Ok the other one didn't seem finished but I'll bite. I don't like the time jump mostly because I was hope for more cute Jack and Optimus. That and you haven't really explored Miko or Raf much. On that note why is this rated M, aside from a little nudity there's nothing in here. Other than those grumps of mine mostly asking for more of your other one. If very good well written and all that jazz.
Ok the other one didn't seem finished but I'll bite. I don't like the time jump mostly because I was hope for more cute Jack and Optimus. That and you haven't really explored Miko or Raf much. On that note why is this rated M, aside from a little nudity there's nothing in here. Other than those grumps of mine mostly asking for more of your other one. If very good well written and all that jazz.