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I love this story so much!
I love this story so much!
8/6/2014 c7 
6MF 22
This last chapter seems a bit nonsensical. I don't understand what you're trying to say, and why there was a sudden switch to bold lettering. Perhaps a beta reader can help you clean it up?
6MF 22This last chapter seems a bit nonsensical. I don't understand what you're trying to say, and why there was a sudden switch to bold lettering. Perhaps a beta reader can help you clean it up?
4/8/2014 c7 3Fantasy-Mania31
Interesting chapter, but I might recommend using a beta to help clear up the grammatical errors.
3Fantasy-Mania31Interesting chapter, but I might recommend using a beta to help clear up the grammatical errors.
3/20/2014 c6 cynder
When are you going to update I really really want to read more so when is chapter 7 coming out
When are you going to update I really really want to read more so when is chapter 7 coming out
11/14/2013 c4 dog1056
Please continue, it's the only thing I can read! I can't stop thinking about what is going to happen next! please UPDATE! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
Please continue, it's the only thing I can read! I can't stop thinking about what is going to happen next! please UPDATE! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
6/9/2013 c4 Guest
I am following and stalking this story! Ha Ha Ha!
Bad joke!
I am following and stalking this story! Ha Ha Ha!
Bad joke!
4/21/2013 c3 Guest
Hope you update soon!
Hope you update soon!
4/19/2013 c2 Guest
Hope you update soon!
Hope you update soon!