for El Camino1/3/2021 c1 
1morena.davidson.3
Definitely not fluffy. Raw and exposed; bittersweet. Thanks for sharing. xo
1morena.davidson.3Definitely not fluffy. Raw and exposed; bittersweet. Thanks for sharing. xo
11/4/2020 c1 Guest
I literally hate every author who writes Bella as such a pushover but Edward is automatically a “romantic” for fucking other women while being hung up on Bella. It’s a no for me.
I literally hate every author who writes Bella as such a pushover but Edward is automatically a “romantic” for fucking other women while being hung up on Bella. It’s a no for me.
12/16/2019 c1 HollywoodTwore
Love love love love love this! It definitely deserved to be a finalist, you're a talented writer.
Thanks for sharing!
Love love love love love this! It definitely deserved to be a finalist, you're a talented writer.
Thanks for sharing!
8/17/2019 c1 DeliciousAudrey
Daaamn you can write. What an amazing one shot.
I might need a few hours to get rid of the feels you just gave me.
Daaamn you can write. What an amazing one shot.
I might need a few hours to get rid of the feels you just gave me.
6/18/2019 c1 frostedglaze
I almost loved this. My heart broke for Bella, when Edward decided to have sex with Tanya and ignore Bella. How is that love? She remained single and a virgin waiting for him, while he ignored her for a whore. He never even answered her when she asked him if he had sex with Tanya. How could he love Bella, and yet have an intimate relationship with someone else? No wonder Bella had no clue about his affections. I just wish she would have gone out with Emmett or Embry and lost her virginity to one of them.
I almost loved this. My heart broke for Bella, when Edward decided to have sex with Tanya and ignore Bella. How is that love? She remained single and a virgin waiting for him, while he ignored her for a whore. He never even answered her when she asked him if he had sex with Tanya. How could he love Bella, and yet have an intimate relationship with someone else? No wonder Bella had no clue about his affections. I just wish she would have gone out with Emmett or Embry and lost her virginity to one of them.
4/1/2019 c1 Amber Energi
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. It was absolutely beautiful to read. It was also quite heartbreaking. Thank you so much for sharing this.
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. It was absolutely beautiful to read. It was also quite heartbreaking. Thank you so much for sharing this.
10/23/2018 c1 Guest
I didnt think it was really romantic...edward didnt treat bella nicely. He gave her mixed signals and was a manwhore with tanya while she did nothing.
I didnt think it was really romantic...edward didnt treat bella nicely. He gave her mixed signals and was a manwhore with tanya while she did nothing.