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3/25/2016 c1 2MintFlavoredFrosting
So, this is a really good idea, but you should probably check your grammar. Just from this chapter I've noticed some problems with grammar ad also some simple typos:

But at leased he breaths,
should be:
But at least he breathes,

When Elphaba finally succeed
should be:
When Elphaba finally succeeded

disseded
should be:
decided

taked a flannel
should be:
took a piece of flannel

These aren't the only mistakes by far, but are some examples. You can probably get a friend of family member to check your spelling and grammar and see what you can improve on!

Remember to keep writing, practice makes perfect!

xxx
Mintstorm
5/9/2013 c2 James Birdsong
The first chapter was cool and well quite good. Just try your best at exam period.
5/10/2013 c1 29Sakura Lisel
I like it, but if this is supposed to be a crossover between Wicked and Les Miserables why isn't it in the crossovers section of the website?
5/10/2013 c2 42Elphaba-WWW
Cool concept! Update whenever you can :) good luck with tests!

Elphie your WWW
5/9/2013 c2 25ExoticPeachBlossom
Hello, I think this story will be an awesome story and I look forward to reading more. I hope you come back to this soon and good luck with your exams!
5/9/2013 c1 4elphiesglinda
Cool Premise, dude! I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

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