
4/19/2013 c1
4sanjana tsukiyomi black
That was fantastic I rly rly rly enjoyed that! Also, your English is better than most native English speakers. I don't know why, but that seems to be the case for most people. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!

That was fantastic I rly rly rly enjoyed that! Also, your English is better than most native English speakers. I don't know why, but that seems to be the case for most people. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!
4/19/2013 c1 malolly96
I'm really excited for the next chapter! Loved it when Clary threw the milkshake :)
I'm really excited for the next chapter! Loved it when Clary threw the milkshake :)
4/18/2013 c1 MandyHerondale4
Continue please and your English is better then mine some times and i'm American and it's a great idea I wish I'd thought of it! :D
Continue please and your English is better then mine some times and i'm American and it's a great idea I wish I'd thought of it! :D
4/18/2013 c1
3Lily Wanderer
This is very well written considering it's your first fanfic in English. I really like this and can't wait to see how it goes. Will the chapters all be from Jace's perspective or will you add in Clary's? Also, is Jace still a player in this story?

This is very well written considering it's your first fanfic in English. I really like this and can't wait to see how it goes. Will the chapters all be from Jace's perspective or will you add in Clary's? Also, is Jace still a player in this story?