for The Major's Kitten4/6 c14 redhotlady7552
I'm sorry, but how do you count? There are 4 of them, not five. 2 guys, and 2 girls. Just sayin'.
I'm sorry, but how do you count? There are 4 of them, not five. 2 guys, and 2 girls. Just sayin'.
12/10/2024 c45 Guest
I love this story! I wish the epilogue was a bit longer, though. Did she learn to fight? Did they get married? Stuff like that. What did they do with assward?
I love this story! I wish the epilogue was a bit longer, though. Did she learn to fight? Did they get married? Stuff like that. What did they do with assward?
10/5/2024 c7 Lisa
Marie Higginbotham was Bella’s maternal grandmother if I remember correctly.
Marie Higginbotham was Bella’s maternal grandmother if I remember correctly.
8/25/2024 c41 Lorelei evans
Esme's denial and disbelief, demanding to know where Alistair had been almost feels like a reference or call back to Molly Grue demanding the same of Amalthea in the Last Unicorn. I loved that movie, and the fact that this one part reminds me of it makes it all the better!
Esme's denial and disbelief, demanding to know where Alistair had been almost feels like a reference or call back to Molly Grue demanding the same of Amalthea in the Last Unicorn. I loved that movie, and the fact that this one part reminds me of it makes it all the better!
7/21/2024 c20 hockeyfanatic
I have read this in the app multiple times but it has no wifi anywho I would LOVE to see a one shot of the story about Alister and Peter to make Alister even more skittish around him
I have read this in the app multiple times but it has no wifi anywho I would LOVE to see a one shot of the story about Alister and Peter to make Alister even more skittish around him
4/6/2024 c45 
77Little-Retard
This story was amazing! I loved the writing style and the characters were all so fun to read about. I purchased the book you promoted at the end, and I look forward to reading it! Great story!
77Little-RetardThis story was amazing! I loved the writing style and the characters were all so fun to read about. I purchased the book you promoted at the end, and I look forward to reading it! Great story!
1/18/2024 c1 Divadog
Brilliant! Absolutely LOVE this Jasper & Bella!
Brilliant! Absolutely LOVE this Jasper & Bella!
9/15/2023 c14 Guest
Ummm...Jasper, Bella, Peter, and Char...that's 4, not 5.
Ummm...Jasper, Bella, Peter, and Char...that's 4, not 5.
9/15/2023 c13 Guest
Ok. You really need to do some correcting. The woman's name is NETTIE. Not NETTLE.
Ok. You really need to do some correcting. The woman's name is NETTIE. Not NETTLE.