for The Major's Kitten5/8/2023 c16 celajwhitney123gmail.com
so Carlisle hired James to kill Bella? was that before Alice showed up to claim Eddie? did Carlisle want Eddie to find a new toy?
so Carlisle hired James to kill Bella? was that before Alice showed up to claim Eddie? did Carlisle want Eddie to find a new toy?
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Jasper was treated very poorly in the books and movies. more like a dressed up pet poodle than a leader of men and then vampires.
Jasper was treated very poorly in the books and movies. more like a dressed up pet poodle than a leader of men and then vampires.
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I was born in Phoenix (a long time ago) and it was hot, dusty and beautiful at night.
I was born in Phoenix (a long time ago) and it was hot, dusty and beautiful at night.
2/14/2023 c45 maite
j'ai beaucoup aimé cette fanfiction
j'ai beaucoup aimé cette fanfiction
12/20/2022 c42 Paty4Hale
I don’t think Jasper is weak. I agree with you in the sense that one character always saving the other caharacter is annoying, and it kind of leaves the other characters with nothing but paper background made to fill dialogue.
So, it’s nice that other characters have significant action.
I like this version of dark Jasper. I love your fic!
I don’t think Jasper is weak. I agree with you in the sense that one character always saving the other caharacter is annoying, and it kind of leaves the other characters with nothing but paper background made to fill dialogue.
So, it’s nice that other characters have significant action.
I like this version of dark Jasper. I love your fic!
12/17/2022 c45 KitchenDancer
Enjoyable read. I like your portrayal of the characters, they were fun to read.
Enjoyable read. I like your portrayal of the characters, they were fun to read.
11/22/2022 c45 
24Mermaid's Magic
Okay I wasn't gonna read this to be honest, but I remember the number of stories I skipped over do to things... and then went back and gave them a chance, and ended up loving them...
Well I read this, all 45 chapters and gotta say it was pretty good. some things I wasn't a huge fan of (Esme being treated how she was) and others I could see being a thing
I mean for two examples Carlisle Cullen being like he was due to how he was raised if he hadn't adjusted like he had in the books/movies...
and Edward/Alice enough said about those two the better...
this might be a bad thing me seeing these things being a thing...
Anyway Love how you gave Esme a new mate, and how you let Emmett and Rose free, and how you made it so that Bella got free and her mate was Jasper who had never been apart of the Cullen clan, and had his own coven!
I guess what I am saying is that I enjoyed it
24Mermaid's MagicOkay I wasn't gonna read this to be honest, but I remember the number of stories I skipped over do to things... and then went back and gave them a chance, and ended up loving them...
Well I read this, all 45 chapters and gotta say it was pretty good. some things I wasn't a huge fan of (Esme being treated how she was) and others I could see being a thing
I mean for two examples Carlisle Cullen being like he was due to how he was raised if he hadn't adjusted like he had in the books/movies...
and Edward/Alice enough said about those two the better...
this might be a bad thing me seeing these things being a thing...
Anyway Love how you gave Esme a new mate, and how you let Emmett and Rose free, and how you made it so that Bella got free and her mate was Jasper who had never been apart of the Cullen clan, and had his own coven!
I guess what I am saying is that I enjoyed it
10/18/2022 c21 GinnyARV
This story is fucking fantastic ! My second time Reading it. One of the best Jasper/Bella fanfie's I have read !
This story is fucking fantastic ! My second time Reading it. One of the best Jasper/Bella fanfie's I have read !