for Harry Potter3/14/2014 c1 Guest9991
Not trying to be harsh but:
you heard about qoutations?
are making me confused write the AN(authors note) in bold and the story in regular print,please and thank you.
and Harry Potter are not good together
are putting 5 chapters in one whole fanfiction chapter
are needing improvement on grammar and spelling
use correct punctuation
are writing it like a freaking play!
8.
Not trying to be harsh but:
you heard about qoutations?
are making me confused write the AN(authors note) in bold and the story in regular print,please and thank you.
and Harry Potter are not good together
are putting 5 chapters in one whole fanfiction chapter
are needing improvement on grammar and spelling
use correct punctuation
are writing it like a freaking play!
8.
4/20/2013 c1 
1Icedearth15876
sorry if this sounds harsh... but i'm being honest:
1. Your choices in spelling and other things to do with it are horrible.
2. Third person fanfiction? Really? Not a good idea.
3. Harry Potter/Twilight crossover? Hell no
1Icedearth15876sorry if this sounds harsh... but i'm being honest:
1. Your choices in spelling and other things to do with it are horrible.
2. Third person fanfiction? Really? Not a good idea.
3. Harry Potter/Twilight crossover? Hell no