
5/24/2013 c1 Guest
nice
nice
5/23/2013 c1 Slevin Kelevra70
Great story, but please don't make every villain he faced in his home world a son or daughter of a god or goddess. just the major ones like Madara, Obito ect.
Great story, but please don't make every villain he faced in his home world a son or daughter of a god or goddess. just the major ones like Madara, Obito ect.
5/22/2013 c1 l K O O L l l A ii D l
Nice first chapter, I can't wait to see more. Hopefully it doesn't take you too long to get back around to this story but I'm eager to see more of this and Ichor Drinking , and I can't forget Sacrificial Second Chance!
Nice first chapter, I can't wait to see more. Hopefully it doesn't take you too long to get back around to this story but I'm eager to see more of this and Ichor Drinking , and I can't forget Sacrificial Second Chance!
5/19/2013 c1 venomking6x2
this is a good ass story. you changed the whole thing and thats what makes it so great instead of the cliche of him joining nancy and befriending percy plot. its an original and hes a son of kronos unlike the other naruto percy jackson crossovers where hes a son of one of the for pairings i would say annabeth cause ive never seen a naruto/annabeth naruto/bianca. percy/thalia or percy/bianca
this is a good ass story. you changed the whole thing and thats what makes it so great instead of the cliche of him joining nancy and befriending percy plot. its an original and hes a son of kronos unlike the other naruto percy jackson crossovers where hes a son of one of the for pairings i would say annabeth cause ive never seen a naruto/annabeth naruto/bianca. percy/thalia or percy/bianca
5/17/2013 c1
2Domic787
very well written and inthralling so I await the next chapter and by the by I think u are going for a naru family in garra and tyu im so happy there seams to be a decent fic that just dosent have naruto as an add on charecture (moves to corner and starts to cry ters of joy T.T) alsow I think u should update peace

very well written and inthralling so I await the next chapter and by the by I think u are going for a naru family in garra and tyu im so happy there seams to be a decent fic that just dosent have naruto as an add on charecture (moves to corner and starts to cry ters of joy T.T) alsow I think u should update peace
5/16/2013 c1
4ex-ellent
Mhmm ... you do know that Chronos (god of Time or time itself) and Cronos (the Titan) are two different beings?

Mhmm ... you do know that Chronos (god of Time or time itself) and Cronos (the Titan) are two different beings?
5/14/2013 c1 Rageing
Epic. I love the dead bone pulse release. It's my favorite of all the bloodlines.
Epic. I love the dead bone pulse release. It's my favorite of all the bloodlines.
5/9/2013 c1 Guest
i loved it
i loved it