for Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze: Ninja Journey6/11/2013 c4 
2TheRazgrizDragon
Interesting but very good story; I especially like what you did with the Sanbi. More Power to you!
2TheRazgrizDragonInteresting but very good story; I especially like what you did with the Sanbi. More Power to you!
5/13/2013 c3 2Agent Scifi Maniac
First off you need a damn good beta for this. It seems that English isn't your first language or you have a very poor command of the English language. Have that beta fix up everything English based and you would get more readers.
However, there is potential here, and I'll be watching.
2Agent Scifi ManiacFirst off you need a damn good beta for this. It seems that English isn't your first language or you have a very poor command of the English language. Have that beta fix up everything English based and you would get more readers.
However, there is potential here, and I'll be watching.
5/10/2013 c3 2TheRazgrizDragon
I can understand weariness about a jinchuuirki but to treat him with some hostility is stupid. For instance Kushina is not a jinchuuriki anymore but now Naruto is. One once had it but is still the same while one doesn't. I just hope it stays under the radar and that the council is put in place. Danzo can go F himself, eh! Anyway, enough of my rant this story is great and I like how it is turning out, I hope Tsunade enters the picture at some point!
2TheRazgrizDragonI can understand weariness about a jinchuuirki but to treat him with some hostility is stupid. For instance Kushina is not a jinchuuriki anymore but now Naruto is. One once had it but is still the same while one doesn't. I just hope it stays under the radar and that the council is put in place. Danzo can go F himself, eh! Anyway, enough of my rant this story is great and I like how it is turning out, I hope Tsunade enters the picture at some point!
5/7/2013 c3 guardian1272
get a beta reader, your story has potential but your grammar needs a lot of work.
get a beta reader, your story has potential but your grammar needs a lot of work.