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3/26/2016 c4 Guest
Please update
10/3/2014 c4 5MaeMacIntosh
Ok, so I love the idea. I'm so glad that someone FINALLY made the connection between the two! Just one thing...please no script, I like it better when the line ahead doesn't spoil what is to come. Also a wee bit of detail here and there would be useful. Overall I really liked it and I can't wait to read more!
2/17/2014 c4 6rain of light
awesome do more
2/12/2014 c4 Guest
Short, sweet, & simple.
Great idea, but a little more detail/story please!
I really did like it!
Ever thought of doing a sequel?
7/11/2013 c4 litzy.rodriguez.31508
You should write more please!
6/20/2013 c4 8Just-another-lonely-fairytale
My only critique: Use quotation marks whenever a person is speaking.

If Cam and Mia are twins, then shouldn't Mia be the same age Cam was in Ninja Storm (Unless this takes place in some AU where NS and [S]S are in the same time period…)
4/22/2013 c1 Just A Crazy Chick
Plzzzzzzzz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i love ur story
4/21/2013 c4 Guest
Well you have a good idea for a story, but you are trying to tell it too fast. slow down write longer more detailed chapters and please stop writing in a script format. I look forward to seeing your writing as you improve.
4/21/2013 c3 lizziestrong
Wow update soon
4/21/2013 c1 12AKA99
'Bout time someone made a story connecting the last names of mia and cam as family
4/20/2013 c2 29BlueGem22
They meet Cam. I wonder if they would meet other rangers. Update soon :)
4/20/2013 c1 BlueGem22
Interesting story. Update soon.

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