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4/23/2013 c1 71JOTRACY123
lovely xxx
4/20/2013 c1 Mistoffles
I have three words for you: punctuation and grammar.

Case in point: your line" "Aw sweetie its okay" Tintin cooed softly in true mother style" should be
""Aw sweetie, it's okay," Tintin cooed softly in true mother style."

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